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Verse 3
Yo, maybe ive mastered certain aspects of this rap game
But it seems you gotta say you blast techs to attract fame Or at least say that you have mad sex and a fat chain All i hear is rappers spittin whack shit the exact same Way, and the mainstreams claimin these tame streets Repetative lyrics are gettin mixed with the same beats Producers see these emcees as only a cashcrop So they turn em into puppets just to make em their jackpot Record label executives dont even know what a record is I reckon its, cause they only care how big of a check it gets It's pathetic, its, takin the sport outta rap I watch BET and it leaves me, bored its so whack But these talentless rappers keep makin their mountains of money If i shock you at 17 you'll be astounded at 20. |
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oh aight,i was going to tell you you was wack since you disrespected my shit ,but your was actually good even though i wanted to tell you
**fuck you*** but one negative thing i can say about it is why make a topic about being wack and then going to everybody saying how wack their verse was |
oh yea,and its whateva
battle me if you think im so wack |
Wait, i dont understand. If i told you your verse was whack, then it probably was... You said yourself you wanted to tell me my verse was whack, but it's not... Cause im not whack... Bye.
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no matter how wack you say i am ,im better than you
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But how can that be? Your just so, whack.
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battle me than ,
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Topical then... Enter my arena.
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damn i see im not da only 1 gettin hated...lol i jus say fuck hataz
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this was ight for some socially conscious shit. and its true on alotta occasions so it some real talk. but the ish on bet is just singles mah dude. you can't judge an artist by that alone ya feel me.
ya flow as on point this was my favorite bar Record label executives dont even know what a record is I reckon its, cause they only care how big of a check it gets ^^ thats some real shit right there.. but be easy n holl bac kat me on my shit |
its ight...flow i aint feeling too much..i dunno if i could picture this to a beat
the vocab needs ta be upped kinda basic what u speakin is real though.its what u truly feel about rap this was ok coulda been better...i'll give it a 5.5/10 mainly cuz it was kinda short too so keep trying |
wasnt that bad work on the werdplay and flow and the rymes so far ur not that bad and u can werk on that man g/l and plus yes the rap game how it is is pretty wack but thats y ur here is to make it to be famous
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flow was ok but tha lines were plain as fuck.....read first four and stopped
boringgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gg felt wut u was sayin ............but your style just was wack.... lines were too simple....an rymes were basic..good structure but other than wut u said it wasnt good |
Man im hittin it with 6 syllable rhymes it aint my fault if you cant see that.
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