i was made for the streets like light poles
weed does stunt your growth and thats what my height show
and just to take the pain away i might smoke
my eye stay low never letting the white show
the problems im dealing with you can say is like white coke
half of these niggas is clowns but i dont like jokes
making a white tee turn colors like michael jackson
g-squad is the faction,we give bored people some action
real niggas is rare like faggots
cause they made my lifestyle into a fashion
thats why i cant wait to be on camera like flashes




im living better but im still in the struggle
all for the cheddar so i feel i got to hustle
all the real hustlas stay getting locked up
and if they not getting locked up their on the block about to get shot up

man this is real talk
the struggle is going to make my hands get dirty like i deal chalk
so like black jack ima deal smart
ive been through alot you can say i got a steel heart
my father wasnt there after i was three he never showed up
and i dont look my age so i try to act grown up
and im like celebrities cause i get hated by people i dont even know of
to the point where it makes you wanna throw up
thats why i cant wait to be like the twin towers and blow up
niggas act like midgets cause they never grow up

im living better but im still in the struggle
all for the cheddar so i feel i got to hustle
all the real hustlas stay getting locked up
and if they not getting locked up their on the block about to get shot up

heat 4 the haters
you coming in this industry is like giving meat to a baker
and you can call me a thermal cause i have heat for the haters
or you can call me mr halloween cause i have a treat for the fakers
sharp like a razor ,and yall gettin hit like a glacier
i aint got time like a broken clock of the wankstas and hateness

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can i get some feedback,

all that feedback i leave on this site and yall cant leave none for me

Good emotion, structure is kinda fucked, vocab is basic, not too many syllibals 5/10 keep droppin

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can i get more feedback cause im not liking the last one

sorry bro i aint got much to say nowadays........lol im to busy with the entire board

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