Superhero
 

I'm a super hero...
Change flicks like robert deniro...
Go in the pen and come out still whole...
My style is out the door..Even Peace was a no-show

In a battle I can for sure bring the text back
Laid back in the Caprice...Bitch Im the next mack
I get in heads I destroy all ego's
Its a federal offense to kill me...like bald eagles

I open doors and slam them behind quickly
So many enemies..even the sidewalk trips me
Fuck wreckage This is the sideshow kid
Find me walking beside your bitch...

Fuck you hoe's I aint in to Little kids
That constantly be running they mouth...Not knowing what a sideshow is..
I bring Violence, ,Cuz bullets tell the truth
I'll knock you back to a newborn So u can renew your youth

2 links or this will be closed.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234974
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235023

I liked it, This probably won't mean much coming from an RV Rookie, But ay? Hu cares

Some pretty cool lines in their dude, the gun ish was mad bullshit, dude ya fakin lol. But the flow is hot and theres a few witty lines there. Some creativity being shown on this. Not really a story this seems just like a quick write up and slap together thing so meh for the imagery on it. The vocab is weak but that didnt matter cuz this was a short piece with a short meaning. Anyway decent job dude, keep it up.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235871

Thanks for the feedback...Uppin this

uppin this. where is all the feedback

this was ight, shawty ya flow was pretty good, and there were some decent punches in there.

I get in heads I destroy all ego's
Its a federal offense to kill me...like bald eagles
^^^that was probably my favorite bar out of the whole joint....
stay up homie...return the favor on my shit...the links r in the sig