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Superhuman Freestyle
heres another one for my next mixtape
this concept was when i was supposedly just spittin a free...and i had like 4 concepts dealin with comic book cats....so i followed thru peep the wordplay...*nods* Superhuman Freestyle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236868 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236863 |
this was pretty slick...
emotion and delivery were lacking... had there been more emotion I'd probably have believed it more... you're pretty much monotone through out the whole thing with a little inflection here and there... as far as the verse... nice lines here and there... the iron man slick... professor x line was delivered pretty good... you went into a Camron flow half way through... um... it worked for you... cause it doesn't work for him... so big ups. |
Some nice lines for a freestyle if it really is one
You sound the same though man, proffesor x line stuck out cause of you said it and all.. You sound the same the whole time though besides that Overall its cool for what it is. |
ya quality needs to be fixed up, some good wordplay and delivery on your wordplay makes me think you redid the freestyle over n over till you got it right, yea i know you did.....yea you sound a lil monotone...fix that up a bit homie.....good lyrics tho...
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good looks yall...and yea i know the quality is not all that......not bad for just usin a hp headset mic and audacity for out here where im at
yea i pretty much got a monotone voice.......my goal is to make 4 mixtapes out here while im deployed......so far i got one and ive only been out here for about 4 months.....2nd one is in the works now i acknowledge the quality.....maybe ill get the nerve to wanna buy somethin professional since im makin dough out here... props on the feed |
this shits ill....lota good multis here...nice metas........lol @ blob lline, spider line nice...lot more to...jean grey line....human toarch line...mr fantastic line, nice...nice man..1st replay track on here in a min
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Listenin' Pimpin...
You the omega making the beats? lol... If so get at me playa.. yeah qual is not good but I like ya style this shit i bump, but it's more comp qual nah mean.. flow is pretty nice, sum soft spots, but nice punches, and multis, like ya delivery...but confidence can be upped... beat is hawt.. keep doing ya thang thang.. holla atcha nig, rtf to tha track "Sweat That Body" pleaseeeee..new single possible video |
this is an okay track....a little more hype would make it tuffer....lyrics are real nice....topic is off the chain and I like how you stuck to it....most cats cant stay on topic like this....beat is real nice also....
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new blood up in here??? no doubt
this beat on that opera shit.... coo if this is really a freestyle.... its dope.... Proffesor X i got alot of brain... LMAO Silver surfer... i fly into space.. lol Mr Fantistic... thats a long stretch... Im that nigga wit sharp hands like Wolverine .... OH SHIt... yea you pretty much killed the comic topic... shit was off the chains... only thing you should prolly improve on is the quality... some further mixing was needed to really enjoy that track... as well as some dubs.... and shit like that... but hey... you claimin freestyle... so.. it is what it is... RAW... Welcome to the boards fam.... Holla at me 9/10 OYD -Don Tito Bronsky |
yeah i liked this!
if only the quality was a lil better and the delivery!..ok this is a free and i must say this is pretty tight!...yep wordplay on the lyrics are cool too!..your flow was steady..the beat aint my steez but works for u!..ummm nothing else! keep it up! |
sounds like a VTZ beat.. i unno..
you speak like chammilionare -_- Flows ok, emotion is boring, got that layed back style, which some will feel, but personally, its generic and boring. Adlibs are all good. Quality is booty, some ok bars in this, but yeh, you lack emotion and i simply got bored listening to this. Not bad. |
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thanx much yall....feelin the love...really appreciate it
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