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Old 11-06-06, 10:04 PM   #1
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New Hit... LAY YO ASS OUT

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New City Squad single... "Lay Yo Ass Out"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4505931

1st-Me
2nd-Big Chris
3rd-Me
chorus-Me

Tell me what yall think... drop links and I'll return the feed 1
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Old 11-06-06, 11:51 PM   #2
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you need to leave feed on two tracks then drop the links in here
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Old 11-06-06, 11:54 PM   #3
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ok my fault fam
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Old 11-07-06, 12:05 AM   #4
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Old 11-07-06, 12:37 AM   #5
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the quality needs to be upped like madd serious flow isnt that bad you sound a lil monotone might be quality....the beat is pretty good...up the quality and i can give you some better feed till then it sounds decent....
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Old 11-07-06, 09:34 AM   #6
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OK ok......listenin.....

ok got some crunkness......

feelin the hook a lil, but like ole dude said the quality is whats makin it hard to determine.....but the emotion is lackin just a lil.....the beat is so hard hittin its hard to even hear yall......id say step the vocals up a lil in the future.....i can understand the beat is gonna sell more than lyrics given that the flow accompanies it

thats about it....

keep at my man......im from the south so i can dig this
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