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KempoMRK 11-26-06 12:20 PM

11. Sir Smash'Alot (2-2) vs 12. Nick Fletcher (2-0)
 


Verses Due Thursday at 11:59PM Eastern
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King Solo 11-26-06 06:12 PM

check.. drop as many and i'll match you..

.. or you match me if I drop first




http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237645
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237639
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237641
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237646

King Solo 11-27-06 01:36 AM

We'll just keep it at 12 lines this week.

So check it, you suck at everything. But take this time to enjoy your 11th spot because your about to get a fast drop to the bottom of the rankings.

Listen up..
I'm not expectin' a brawl.. 'coz now this dude's gone hyper
When he realised it was his family reunion - in the LBL Cypher
Ure audio sucks.. 0-2!?! no wonder we never hear you truly rip it
'Coz the only time ure vinyl murder..
.. is if I take it from you and choke you with it!
Its true my friend.. and still ure audio don't slip through the cracks
Hell, we all pick up ure CD, listen.. then sir, smash'alot of ure tracks
Your text is better, I know.. hell, you's a keyboard freak
But the only win you'll get over Nick..
.. is from when that gay bitch no-showed last week.
You couldn't take me in a fight.. my punches'll make ure bars diminish
I'm undefeated and ure record just shows the only spot in which you'll finish
I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.

Word. :thumbup:

Sir Smash'Alot 11-28-06 05:44 PM

Your words ruined like kids who slur, but yah im ripping herbs,
Those punches you dropped? Fucking Played like your signature
Beatin me? How is possible, must not know im unstopable
Yeah we all scream fletchER if we needed arrows in hospitals
Im totin big shit, and im holdin big clips, and foldin this dick
Beat me? Never, Nick bay sick like people with motion sickness
Protect ya neck, like ya collars up, you needa get ya dollars up
Your styles old, so nick's useless nowadays like 5 dollars of bud
Fuck it, this whores so old, flow hot? nah nick of course its cold,
Punches got him on a machine sound like he speakin in morse code(beeeeeeep)
Respect this master, Next week, on ranks, He wrecked n latter
This is comedian school, and Nicks everybodies subject of laughter

Probly the hardest ive tried this league =/

okay 11-28-06 07:11 PM

Its true my friend.. and still ure audio don't slip through the cracks
Hell, we all pick up ure CD, listen.. then sir, smash'alot of ure tracks
You couldn't take me in a fight.. my punches'll make ure bars diminish
I'm undefeated and ure record just shows the only spot in which you'll finish
I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.

Vs

Beatin me? How is possible, must not know im unstopable
Yeah we all scream fletchER if we needed arrows in hospitals

V/nick fletcher...this was a pretty onesided battle...sir you had that one line that was decent at best..it coulda hit harder wit better wording..but most ya verse was played concepts work on that..nick you had a good verse wit some good personals an punchs that hit an overall more consistent..you get my vote

DaTrusHurtz 11-29-06 12:22 PM

I'm not expectin' a brawl.. 'coz now this dude's gone hyper
When he realised it was his family reunion - in the LBL Cypher
Its true my friend.. and still ure audio don't slip through the cracks
Hell, we all pick up ure CD, listen.. then sir, smash'alot of ure tracks
I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.

vs.

Beatin me? How is possible, must not know im unstopable
Yeah we all scream fletchER if we needed arrows in hospitals

Nick came okay, fairly consistent and some cool lines. Family reunion was a good idea, I was gonna do something like that this week, but u beat me too it... damn... Smash, this was an improvement for sure, but keep workin' at it. Even the line I quoted, ER lines are played. Work on being more creative and more direct. A lot ur shit just makes statements and isn't direct to the point with the punches like Nick is. Good try tho.

Vote - Nick Fletcher

Comedian 11-30-06 11:28 AM

Nick got this.


I only liked the arrow line from Sir, but even that didn't hit that hard. Nick on the other hand had a nice opener. The next line wasn't very good, though. Yeah, I get the vinyl / vine'll play but it wasn't really tied in... the audio set-up could have been a lot stronger. The spot line was nice, and so was the parking lot. Overall, I got Fletcher taking this with harder. more consistent punches.


Vote: Nick Fletcher

TEF 12-01-06 04:27 PM

I'm not expectin' a brawl.. 'coz now this dude's gone hyper
When he realised it was his family reunion - in the LBL Cypher
^LOL
Its true my friend.. and still ure audio don't slip through the cracks
Hell, we all pick up ure CD, listen.. then sir, smash'alot of ure tracks
^OUCH
You couldn't take me in a fight.. my punches'll make ure bars diminish
I'm undefeated and ure record just shows the only spot in which you'll finish
^A KICK IN THE NUTS
I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.
^GOOD PLAY ON HIS NAME


vs


Your words ruined like kids who slur, but yah im ripping herbs,
Those punches you dropped? Fucking Played like your signature
^ I'M LIKING THAT
Respect this master, Next week, on ranks, He wrecked n latter
This is comedian school, and Nicks everybodies subject of laughter
^PROBABLY THE BEST PUNCH I'VE SEEN FROM YOU

V/Nick

Good try Sir but he just had more stuff like makin fun of your audios, yur record, and yur name, were as the only GOOD personal you threw was the thing on his sig

blacksilence 12-01-06 05:39 PM

I'm not expectin' a brawl.. 'coz now this dude's gone hyper
When he realised it was his family reunion - in the LBL Cypher
Its true my friend.. and still ure audio don't slip through the cracks
Hell, we all pick up ure CD, listen.. then sir, smash'alot of ure tracks
I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.

vs.

Beatin me? How is possible, must not know im unstopable
Yeah we all scream fletchER if we needed arrows in hospitals

nick got this easily the other guy had 1 iight line

v/ nick

Roger Glocks 12-01-06 06:42 PM

nick'

Ure audio sucks.. 0-2!?! no wonder we never hear you truly rip it
'Coz the only time ure vinyl murder..
.. is if I take it from you and choke you with it!

I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.

vs

sir smash alot

Respect this master, Next week, on ranks, He wrecked n latter
This is comedian school, and Nicks everybodies subject of laughter


aight battle...but nick got this...sir came cool juss didn't have enuff...

vote-nick fletcher

Stanza. 12-01-06 09:29 PM

Ure audio sucks.. 0-2!?! no wonder we never hear you truly rip it
'Coz the only time ure vinyl murder..
.. is if I take it from you and choke you with it!

vs.

Beatin me? How is possible, must not know im unstopable
Yeah we all scream fletchER if we needed arrows in hospitals

That was the best bar that I thought that both of you dropped and personally i think that nicks hit harder than Sir'z But anyway Overall nicks Punchez overthrew wat sir was saying so my vote

Nick

Native Pryde 12-01-06 09:47 PM

Its true my friend.. and still ure audio don't slip through the cracks
Hell, we all pick up ure CD, listen.. then sir, smash'alot of ure tracks
I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.

vs.

Beatin me? How is possible, must not know im unstopable
Yeah we all scream fletchER if we needed arrows in hospitals

really not much to say, Nick took this easily. I liked tha reunion line & tha vinyl line aswell but I jus quoted these two. Sir came decent at best. You really gotta come more creative tho cause tha er line is not orginal at all. Ok battle tho.

Vote-Nick

King Solo 12-02-06 04:11 AM

word, that's 8-0 I believe...

... now go vote on my other battles, word.

KempoMRK 12-03-06 08:27 AM

Nick Fletcher wins 8-0.

Nick Fletcher wins (3-0)
Sir Smash'Alot loses (2-3)


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