New shit from InDeath (Wordz AhGod)
 

My attemp at a lyrical track...I was kinda mad half way through it for personal reasons so it goes a bit of I guess..I know.

The Song is called

Angry S***

www.soundclick.com/rawking

I'll return with feed if you leave links thanks





links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238941
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238436

Word....I'm feeling this man. You slip up a little bit a couple of times, but overall it was a pretty good verse. Wish you would have turned it into a full song, but whatever. Good shit though man :thumbup:

yeah thanks...Im not really into writing lyrical pieces but I just wanted to show people that I could do em if I wanted. but thanks...Im probably gonna add another verse some time this week.

Uppin for more feed you bastards!!!!

shits like 20 bars I think...lol...Im gonna right to it tomorrow...I cant take credit for the beat coz I thinks its a Jedi Mind Tricks beat. Dont think I'll add a hook though coz I dont have the voice for the hook I want to do.

UP Up n away...

Listenin'....

beat is hot...Your quality isn't great..but you're flow is pretty hot..multis are nice, breath control is lackin but that's jus cutting some words out..you're delivery is underground which is hot.....

btw if you still neeed a verse on Reggaetony I got u..ya dig

Id appreciate it man..both the feed and you hopping on that track...just keep in contact with me on it....holla at me if you want me to redo or rewrite my verse coz I was kinda rushing it really. but thanks on the feed fam.

ur flow is ncie...but u need some stops in ur delivery...a lil more dynamicism with it

Is that even a word?

slick soundin verse tho man


keep em comin


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Word^ good looking out

I remember this beat from somewhere i dont know buts its ill yup. A pop is ya verse i notice. but word ya lyrics is tight man and im def feelin most ya flows. Your volume of the vocals could be upped but you delivered that lil verse pretty ill. overall lil freeverse track it pretty coo man, I'm feelin it.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...152#post3131152