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01-02-07, 10:15 PM
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ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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New shit from InDeath (Wordz AhGod)
IP: D681 4A91
My attemp at a lyrical track...I was kinda mad half way through it for personal reasons so it goes a bit of I guess..I know.
The Song is called Angry S*** www.soundclick.com/rawking I'll return with feed if you leave links thanks links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238941 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238436
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01-02-07, 10:42 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 93D1 7B98
Word....I'm feeling this man. You slip up a little bit a couple of times, but overall it was a pretty good verse. Wish you would have turned it into a full song, but whatever. Good shit though man
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01-03-07, 12:32 AM
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IP: D681 4A91
yeah thanks...Im not really into writing lyrical pieces but I just wanted to show people that I could do em if I wanted. but thanks...Im probably gonna add another verse some time this week.
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01-03-07, 02:07 AM
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ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: D681 4A91
Uppin for more feed you bastards!!!!
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01-03-07, 03:06 AM
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IP: D681 4A91
shits like 20 bars I think...lol...Im gonna right to it tomorrow...I cant take credit for the beat coz I thinks its a Jedi Mind Tricks beat. Dont think I'll add a hook though coz I dont have the voice for the hook I want to do.
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01-03-07, 04:56 AM
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ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: D681 4A91
UP Up n away...
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01-03-07, 09:19 AM
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The Most Feared Gang!
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IP: 5AB8 1212
Listenin'....
beat is hot...Your quality isn't great..but you're flow is pretty hot..multis are nice, breath control is lackin but that's jus cutting some words out..you're delivery is underground which is hot..... btw if you still neeed a verse on Reggaetony I got u..ya dig
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01-03-07, 09:27 AM
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ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: D681 4A91
Id appreciate it man..both the feed and you hopping on that track...just keep in contact with me on it....holla at me if you want me to redo or rewrite my verse coz I was kinda rushing it really. but thanks on the feed fam.
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01-03-07, 02:37 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
ur flow is ncie...but u need some stops in ur delivery...a lil more dynamicism with it
Is that even a word? slick soundin verse tho man keep em comin 1 |
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01-03-07, 08:31 PM
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IP: D681 4A91
Word^ good looking out
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01-04-07, 07:19 AM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
I remember this beat from somewhere i dont know buts its ill yup. A pop is ya verse i notice. but word ya lyrics is tight man and im def feelin most ya flows. Your volume of the vocals could be upped but you delivered that lil verse pretty ill. overall lil freeverse track it pretty coo man, I'm feelin it.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...152#post3131152
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