[New Track!] GangGreen: 2 Way Street
 

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you look good :)
vocals are way too loud
flwo is on but ti isnt too smooth
sounds like your reading it off of the paper

i like this second guys voice sounds kinda sexy
flow is better than the first guys vocals are loud too

word aint that a spontane beat. oh well beats ill...your vocals way to loud dude...flow is decent it's a little rough, you could done it a bit more smoothly. your lyrics are cool, real talk n what not. you shoulda put some vocals on the hook..short adlibs or somin like that and it'd be coo. 2nd verse is a bit better, I'm likin ya flow a little more. overall the track is decent, not really somin I'd bump. I think you coulda done a better job with it.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...113#post3132113

I like the beat...this is what Ike and I are gonna rip

ur flow is a lil jerky on this beat...

lyrics are real soundin tho


Love is a key to a man's heart? I thought it was the stomach!


decent track...jus need to polish ur flow and mixing



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