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Tha .Q 05-13-07 06:51 PM
Y'all have heard my tracks before, but you NEED to hear this one
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5340173




^^Deepness there!!!




Haters need not apply.



:gfy:

Ysdat 05-13-07 07:51 PM
You should punch, end a your verse your flow is fucked up, when you double time it it starts sounding forced.
Apart from that, this is real, which cant be knocked. damn you allmost thirty?!
anyway, cool track.

Tha .Q 05-13-07 08:01 PM
End of which verse?







but yea...I'm jus doin it up real style




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Terumoto 05-13-07 08:03 PM
Pretty cool... One thing I noticed though, the part at the end where you're just sort of saying random things seems a bit unnecessary, or unnecessarily long or something.

Tha .Q 05-13-07 08:05 PM
P.S. The 2nd verse when I double time it...I rush it like that on purpose

Im basically spitting 15-20 syllables in 1 line...tryna sound frantic...frenetic...

So, when it comes to the lyrics...I'm sacrificing flow there...

on purpose

Tha .Q 05-13-07 08:07 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Terumoto
Pretty cool... One thing I noticed though, the part at the end where you're just sort of saying random things seems a bit unnecessary, or unnecessarily long or something.





^^^well...it's habit




LOL


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