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05-13-07, 06:51 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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Y'all have heard my tracks before, but you NEED to hear this one
IP: B4EB 5C31
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05-13-07, 07:51 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
You should punch, end a your verse your flow is fucked up, when you double time it it starts sounding forced.
Apart from that, this is real, which cant be knocked. damn you allmost thirty?! anyway, cool track. |
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05-13-07, 08:01 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
End of which verse?
but yea...I'm jus doin it up real style 1 |
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05-13-07, 08:03 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 80D6 7866
Pretty cool... One thing I noticed though, the part at the end where you're just sort of saying random things seems a bit unnecessary, or unnecessarily long or something.
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05-13-07, 08:05 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
P.S. The 2nd verse when I double time it...I rush it like that on purpose
Im basically spitting 15-20 syllables in 1 line...tryna sound frantic...frenetic... So, when it comes to the lyrics...I'm sacrificing flow there... on purpose |
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05-13-07, 08:07 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
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^^^well...it's habit LOL |
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