1st Keystyle
 

1st Keystyle On This Site....Lets Get It In...


Listen As I Proceed To Spit Rhymes, Cock And Clip Nines...
They Step Back When I Spit Mines, My Barz Hit To Hard They Just Split Minds...


Seriously...


I'm Bout 2 Rip These Fools To Shreds, I'll Lyrically Sadomize...
I Drop 'Bombs' And I Enjoy It, Like I Was Lookin Thru 'Saddams~Eyes'...
I'm Tryin 2 Bring Life To Hip-Hop, So Prepare For War...
'9's And Mac 11's.' I Got 'Steel~Numbers', Now That's A 'Metal~4'...(Metaphor)
Could I Possibly B The Best Nigga Here, Well Why Not...
They Could Never Win, Kuz They Missin 'One~I', Like 'Cyclops'...(Get It)

Ok Time 4 Sumthin More Betta...

I Kno U Bitches Is Feelin Me, Kuz I'm Superior Physically...
U Not Betta Than Me Mentally, So How Can U B Betta Lyrically...
I'm Lookin Thru Vivid~Eyes, I Could Feel Their Lyrics~Demise...
As I Can See Thru The Restless Souls, Of Timid~Guys...
Watch As I Proceed To Break~Whores, Rip And Break~Jaws...
I'll Lyrically 'Kill', So I Metaphorically 'Break~Laws'...
Im Betta Than Ya Average Concept, I'll 'Illusion' Ya Verse, So I 'Con~Texts'...*
They Mad Kuzz I Bomb~Jects, I'm Done Here, I'm Just To Complex...

FEEDBACK WOULD BE MUCH APPRECIATED...

O Yea Free Agent So If Anyones Interested...Holla At Me...

*Illusion=They Don't Exist Compared To Mines, So I'm Connin Ya Verses

Good Lookin Man, I'm Appreciate It....And Nah I Aint Got Audio Yet...But If U Do Text Then I'm Definately 4 A Collab..Just PM Me Or Sumthin Let Me Kno What's Up

i never post any of my proffessional shit on here,only my have ass quick throw together shit..

^^^^^^^^^^^ true...same here chalk.....less i feel like gettin serious.....


anyways.......good shit F@M3-Iz .......everything was on point punches multis etc....keep it up ~1~

Appreciate It KM....But Anybody Know How To Put The Links Up...Kuz I'm On A Sidekick and I Don't Kno How To Do It From This and I Don't Want My Post Bein Deleted And Stuff

u gotta give feedback to other post ....at least 2.....then use those links and post them up next to yours so it dont get closed up.....~1~

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shit was sick i liked the wordplay and punches nice drop n keep hot peace

Thanks KM...Here's My Links:


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eh not bad...... delivery of the wordplay could use some touchin up, i see ur point but the delivery needs some polishin, some played concepts here and there but yo i see ur just elevatin like everyone else

i like ur structure, although nothin new at least its solid
cyclops line was coo
metal four line was kinda forced.....u couldve been like.....
i aint rappin here, ur broad loves fuckin me yea thats what i Meta-for(met her for)

rest was either basic or played..... coo flow tho..... try watchin tv if ur lookin for concepts and tryin to be a lil original.....

ps i acknowledge it was a keystyle so big ups for producin that

this was tight...
the word play was good

and vocab
i like it