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K-M has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-07 08:55 PM.

........Good luck....im gonna drop mines....~1~.............

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another Slave Queer on my Hit List to dismantle with a Quick Diss/
i'll Lay Fear in an instant to This Chick stuck on Dick Shit/
u stepping on grounds like u a master but ive forseen your Weak Points/
u love sucking dick so much that u dont mind pain in your Knees and Joints!/
u "fear to get layed" maybe cause your Tube Steak Microscopic/
or u dont like pussy u rather have cum Juice Sprayed on your Eye Optics!/
in battles i bring paladin calvary ancient swords to show u how i Slay Fear/
u only act hard on RV while off the net u cross dress with your Gay Peers!/
its a wrap for u cause lyrically u fried like Indonesians do monkey Brain Matter/
leaving u in more Pain than heavy Bladders your period to Reign with fear Shattered/
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Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-07 03:02 PM.

Im sonnin ya...
Iv seen some ya verses, Im familiar so don't try gloatin fool
cuz if ya punches are jus the tip of the iceberg,
............then the rest must be even further from bein quotables
ya hoax is bull, but ya look nervous an froze now
s'when I wreck the train of ur thought,
............all nearby subway stations will be closed down
ya got me wastin my time, n when it comes to me, your stoppin
swhen people see the pics of ya broken jaws...the movie will be forgotten
Im keyin this quick..may be shit..but better than urs on my worst day
but ur the first,
...ive seen put a SENTENCE in parenthesis jus to explain his word play!
obsurd gay..ya shits stolen man,..lmao what u writin to prove..
I'd say your verse was common......but you've prolly been bitin him TOO

bllaaa...get some votess niggie..

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s'when I wreck the train of ur thought,
............all nearby subway stations will be closed down

^^^^^^^^^^ i like that line alot shit was nice......

the rest of your shit was good but i know this not your best....

i didn't try much either.....o well though good shit ~1~

Voted For: K-M

again K-M doin his thing keep doin it homie. change up style a lil summ times though


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Voted For: Lay Fear

ya hoax is bull, but ya look nervous an froze now
s'when I wreck the train of ur thought,
............all nearby subway stations will be closed down
obsurd gay..ya shits stolen man,..lmao what u writin to prove..
I'd say your verse was common......but you've prolly been bitin him TOO

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u stepping on grounds like u a master but ive forseen your Weak Points/
u love sucking dick so much that u dont mind pain in your Knees and Joints!/

v/ Lay for harder punches, more consistent verse

okay battle..



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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-MIX...lol feedback still...the last bar killed it tho' still...I wouldn't mind battling yo brah.

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gotta get these battles closed so i can start new ones lol.....so....uppin on this.....vote please.......~1~

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Voted For: Lay Fear

K-M -nice word play, but inconsistant line length... gay jokes get played out, unless those are personals i'm not getting... nice vocab, but some used int the wrong context... eye optics... anything optical has to do w/ the eye...

Lay Fear- if i've ever had a pet peeve it's spelling... wow... i've never seen anyone miss i've before... decent punches, and tho i don't like how the dots ..... are used to seperate bars, it was useful in establishing planned breaks in ur flow, so i ddn't hold that against you... better punches overall next time leave ut the lmao...

decent battle...

V/ lay fear

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Voted For: K-M

I give this shit to K-M jus cuz his flow and shit was funny and it all went together good but this was really really hard to vote on trust me!


I'll keep votin on ur 2 if u guyz go vote on mine!