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Title: Flow of Gold
I usually bust out smooth as silk/ but inspirartion got sour like old dirty milk/ i lost my flow again, im feelin low again/ tossin' crumpled up sheets to tha recycle bin/ there's a block in my head/ my brain is dead/ plan after plan, the paper i shred/ need a flow that'll make em bounce/ gotta anounce, cant mispronounce/ I have a stirrin in my soul/ i may reach my goal/ i think its a flow/ a'ight here I GO!/ I begin ta smirk , i found rhymes that'll work/ organize my words on paper like a mail clerk/ T-minus your life and countin down/ livin it for what it is, not gonna drown/ good rhymes are rare/ find em if you dare/ unreal as a desert rose , bright as a solar flare/ im not rhymin wit a crew/ im solo through and through/ I sportin dark blue/ flown loud and clear givin ya a clue/ no beats no muzik, jus me my book pen and ink/ find one word then find a rhyme to link/ cuz there's no "sync"/ as i sit here and think/ sippin through sof' drinks/ Im tired of hearin the same mess on the radio/ so im commin out wit a different kind of audio/ i make my self knnown/ my skills will be shown/ the people will see that my rhymes are home grown/ and i cant be thrown/ I know there's people that arent big fans of Rap/ but im gonna clear that up ASAP/bridge tha GAP/ some people flow for money and recognition/ other people do just cuz they like to be dissin/ ill admit , i wont lie i wanna be famous too/ but flowin is also a part of me hope this part gets through/ not the type to bling bling wit tha ice on my wris'/ i got two rings , thats it, its really tha raps that make bliss/ i'll write till theres no light/ ill flow till theres no more/ focus and maintain sight/ bust out an keep score/ no matter what comes up and tries to gimme tha rush/ ill keep shoutin' my words till i get larengitus/ All i can do is be true to you, meaning me/ bustin so hard ans so loud , tha sound you can see/ im up for tha challenge ready for flight/ pick up tha mic cuz theres no wrong or right/ jottin' down in my journal, till the break of dawn/ till the break of dawn, ill write my song/ my heart wont give out, im gonna keep goin/ put heart and soul in my rhymes have em all knowin/ rappin and rhymin it sets me free/ its tha wat I proclaim thats the way i decree/ i keep holdin' on to my flowin thats golden/ if im brokin' then ill be chokin, no jokin/ where ever i bust where ever i go/ i gotta make sure tha people know/ that im me , Lo-D, thats all ill be. plain to see/ no one else in tha world quite like me/ my words are free/ im here to entice , not to cut and slice/ onece ,twice, thrice, tossin up rice/ flowin at tha speed of sound, high velocity/ payin tha fee, an avoiding contraversy/ Cope wit the anger and pain/ I stand in the rain, the tears of the slain/ starring at the star fillied sky, i let out a cry/ and ask it why/ but theres no reply/ life is not all blood and tears/ as long as you conquer tha fears/ and ignore the jeers/ so before i take my last breath on earth/ im gonna leave my mark, my legacy since birth/ what ever i write im proud of it/ if i can just get in front of the crowd and spit/ and make it lagit/ and my flows cant be crappy/ then ill be happy, and i wont get sappy/ cuz this is Lo-D's flow of gold, and im keepin it alive till ive grown old/ never in my life have i been so bold/ now i say peace as this session grows cold/ |
bars are short vocab is weak and ideas are played you have no originality and my 11 brother has a bigger vocab
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feel good?
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i bust a sound that's too good for main stream/
i dont bust out with a rhymin' team/ i do it for my own slef/ straight from the ice shelf/ from me to your self/ i comin' in stealth/ ignore what haters say/ cuz im just a player ,night till day/ reclusively/ not gettin caught cuz i move elusively/ finding just a few who rhyme inclusively/ hear the rhymes that rock intuitively/ cant help it if i dont flow quite the same/ konichiwa/ let out my name , mi name-wa/ Lo , Lil' Lo D/ hop to the beat/ dont fracture your knee/ just want you to see/ me for me/ cuz thats who i be/ |
keep rhymin, i never tell anyone they flow is weak cause everyone has gotta start somewhere, i know what its like, hell im still at the beginning.... just elaborate a tiny bit more and next time your drop on open mic, dont drop and huge amount, just a tiny bit, you might get more views and comments that way, i dont really like reading through huge amounts of rhymes, but thats just my wack opinion lol.... keep rhymin
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wow a nice person on a rap board , yur like my friend now us nice ppl gotta stick together , and thanks for the constructive criticism :)
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