Title: Flow of Gold

I usually bust out smooth as silk/
but inspirartion got sour like old dirty milk/
i lost my flow again, im feelin low again/
tossin' crumpled up sheets to tha recycle bin/
there's a block in my head/
my brain is dead/
plan after plan, the paper i shred/
need a flow that'll make em bounce/
gotta anounce, cant mispronounce/
I have a stirrin in my soul/
i may reach my goal/
i think its a flow/
a'ight here I GO!/

I begin ta smirk , i found rhymes that'll work/
organize my words on paper like a mail clerk/
T-minus your life and countin down/
livin it for what it is, not gonna drown/
good rhymes are rare/
find em if you dare/
unreal as a desert rose , bright as a solar flare/
im not rhymin wit a crew/
im solo through and through/
I sportin dark blue/
flown loud and clear givin ya a clue/
no beats no muzik, jus me my book pen and ink/
find one word then find a rhyme to link/
cuz there's no "sync"/
as i sit here and think/
sippin through sof' drinks/

Im tired of hearin the same mess on the radio/
so im commin out wit a different kind of audio/
i make my self knnown/
my skills will be shown/
the people will see that my rhymes are home grown/
and i cant be thrown/

I know there's people that arent big fans of Rap/
but im gonna clear that up ASAP/bridge tha GAP/
some people flow for money and recognition/
other people do just cuz they like to be dissin/
ill admit , i wont lie i wanna be famous too/
but flowin is also a part of me hope this part gets through/

not the type to bling bling wit tha ice on my wris'/
i got two rings , thats it, its really tha raps that make bliss/
i'll write till theres no light/
ill flow till theres no more/
focus and maintain sight/
bust out an keep score/
no matter what comes up and tries to gimme tha rush/
ill keep shoutin' my words till i get larengitus/

All i can do is be true to you, meaning me/
bustin so hard ans so loud , tha sound you can see/
im up for tha challenge ready for flight/
pick up tha mic cuz theres no wrong or right/
jottin' down in my journal, till the break of dawn/
till the break of dawn, ill write my song/
my heart wont give out, im gonna keep goin/
put heart and soul in my rhymes have em all knowin/
rappin and rhymin it sets me free/
its tha wat I proclaim thats the way i decree/
i keep holdin' on to my flowin thats golden/
if im brokin' then ill be chokin, no jokin/
where ever i bust where ever i go/
i gotta make sure tha people know/
that im me , Lo-D, thats all ill be. plain to see/
no one else in tha world quite like me/
my words are free/
im here to entice , not to cut and slice/
onece ,twice, thrice, tossin up rice/
flowin at tha speed of sound, high velocity/
payin tha fee, an avoiding contraversy/

Cope wit the anger and pain/
I stand in the rain, the tears of the slain/
starring at the star fillied sky, i let out a cry/
and ask it why/
but theres no reply/
life is not all blood and tears/
as long as you conquer tha fears/
and ignore the jeers/
so before i take my last breath on earth/
im gonna leave my mark, my legacy since birth/

what ever i write im proud of it/
if i can just get in front of the crowd and spit/
and make it lagit/
and my flows cant be crappy/
then ill be happy, and i wont get sappy/
cuz this is Lo-D's flow of gold, and im keepin it alive till ive grown old/
never in my life have i been so bold/
now i say peace as this session grows cold/

bars are short vocab is weak and ideas are played you have no originality and my 11 brother has a bigger vocab
~1~

feel good?

i bust a sound that's too good for main stream/
i dont bust out with a rhymin' team/
i do it for my own slef/
straight from the ice shelf/
from me to your self/
i comin' in stealth/
ignore what haters say/
cuz im just a player ,night till day/
reclusively/
not gettin caught cuz i move elusively/
finding just a few who rhyme inclusively/
hear the rhymes that rock intuitively/
cant help it if i dont flow quite the same/
konichiwa/
let out my name , mi name-wa/
Lo , Lil' Lo D/
hop to the beat/
dont fracture your knee/
just want you to see/
me for me/
cuz thats who i be/

keep rhymin, i never tell anyone they flow is weak cause everyone has gotta start somewhere, i know what its like, hell im still at the beginning.... just elaborate a tiny bit more and next time your drop on open mic, dont drop and huge amount, just a tiny bit, you might get more views and comments that way, i dont really like reading through huge amounts of rhymes, but thats just my wack opinion lol.... keep rhymin