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Swift 03-09-03 10:39 PM

"1 Last Chance"
 
Nobody rest till every last one's free/
In the circle of life dis da way it has to be
Prayer and fast by old me who've grown wiery/
Dey ask GOD for help but believe da contrary
To forgive us of our sins God gave his only son/
The truth only lies were the light is neva shone
wishin you can bring back the old but whuts done is done/
Bum standin on the corner screamin hail da choosen one
Words from the wise in da ear and out the other/
Neva touches ya life till it hits ya motha or brotha
This the only time that real pain is eva felt/
Another name to his list anotha notch on his belt
The future lies in the words already spelt/
praying to be on the other side when the earth starts to melt
Flesh and blood peelin of ya bones/
Flashbacks of high school when ya had ya first jones
All the riches in the world all the silver and gold/
You could of had it all till it was your soul that you sold

unifire 03-10-03 12:33 AM

man nice rhymes, ur flow was pretty good
and the shit was deep and true .. keep ur pieces up !
peace out...

inspire 03-10-03 12:53 AM

nice concept but the flow was sorta off in the beginning... but its still good... especially this..
All the riches in the world all the silver and gold/
You could of had it all till it was your soul that you sold
...keep rhymin


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