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Old 03-09-03, 10:39 PM   #1
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Nobody rest till every last one's free/
In the circle of life dis da way it has to be
Prayer and fast by old me who've grown wiery/
Dey ask GOD for help but believe da contrary
To forgive us of our sins God gave his only son/
The truth only lies were the light is neva shone
wishin you can bring back the old but whuts done is done/
Bum standin on the corner screamin hail da choosen one
Words from the wise in da ear and out the other/
Neva touches ya life till it hits ya motha or brotha
This the only time that real pain is eva felt/
Another name to his list anotha notch on his belt
The future lies in the words already spelt/
praying to be on the other side when the earth starts to melt
Flesh and blood peelin of ya bones/
Flashbacks of high school when ya had ya first jones
All the riches in the world all the silver and gold/
You could of had it all till it was your soul that you sold
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Old 03-10-03, 12:33 AM   #2
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man nice rhymes, ur flow was pretty good
and the shit was deep and true .. keep ur pieces up !
peace out...
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Old 03-10-03, 12:53 AM   #3
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nice concept but the flow was sorta off in the beginning... but its still good... especially this..
All the riches in the world all the silver and gold/
You could of had it all till it was your soul that you sold
...keep rhymin
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