Whats the price of life
 

Whats the price of life/
whats the cost of fame/
pain and suffering is all part of the game/
life is miserable takes time to make sense/
dealing wit pressure trying to build a defense/
what kind of cards is life dealing me/
when yall read my post let me know if ya feelin me/
i cant control all the cards startin to unfold/
so u gotta keep cut stay sharp try hard at ya goals/
so i lean up think hard an confident that i'm bold/
always be competitive and fight hard cause life is cold/
young rappers never backdown/
i know u nieve and dont believe and help is never around/
but just struggle keep ya mind set u cant get it right now/
thats life swallow it youl never fall down/
i aint tryin to be a hero i aint dying to minister/
i'm just spreadin the word life could blow like a canister/
spray cans young artist you gotta start somewhere/
cause life witout artist man this world would be no where/
drug dealers stay dealin cause i know what its like/ yall doing ya thing thats apart of this life/
maintain ya wealth so you'll have somethin to show/
stay out of the system so there'll be somewhre to go/
no intelligents is negligents of ya self/
but fight life and try hard and youll better your self/

tight flow, shit got me tickling inside ..

your words jus make sense to me man..

i like dat shit..

keep flowin my brotha..mad props..

i liked this one... i give it an 8/10... coulda been better, work more on your vocab, use big words... makes you sound smarter lol... not a masterpiece, but one of the works you keep.... keep rhymin

Yo MDB, good to see you have figured out how to lay it out, took the caps lock off and pressed enter but dogg u really deserve to be gettin slept on, you keep postion yo rhymes but you aint commentin on everyone else, don't be a fucken sleeper out here, gotta give a little to get a little, this was alright, just stop sleepin!!!!

Peace Out!!!!!

it was a good piece, heaps common though, u get more replies to topics that are original.. not pickin on u or ne thing though.. vocab was alil elementary but u had some good lines like...
i cant control all the cards startin to unfold/
so u gotta keep cut stay sharp try hard at ya goals/

and

spray cans young artist you gotta start somewhere/
cause life witout artist man this world would be no where/

i like those lines.. keep spittin
peace out