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03-21-03, 01:40 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Whats the price of life
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Whats the price of life/
whats the cost of fame/ pain and suffering is all part of the game/ life is miserable takes time to make sense/ dealing wit pressure trying to build a defense/ what kind of cards is life dealing me/ when yall read my post let me know if ya feelin me/ i cant control all the cards startin to unfold/ so u gotta keep cut stay sharp try hard at ya goals/ so i lean up think hard an confident that i'm bold/ always be competitive and fight hard cause life is cold/ young rappers never backdown/ i know u nieve and dont believe and help is never around/ but just struggle keep ya mind set u cant get it right now/ thats life swallow it youl never fall down/ i aint tryin to be a hero i aint dying to minister/ i'm just spreadin the word life could blow like a canister/ spray cans young artist you gotta start somewhere/ cause life witout artist man this world would be no where/ drug dealers stay dealin cause i know what its like/ yall doing ya thing thats apart of this life/ maintain ya wealth so you'll have somethin to show/ stay out of the system so there'll be somewhre to go/ no intelligents is negligents of ya self/ but fight life and try hard and youll better your self/ |
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03-21-03, 01:46 AM | #2 | ||||||
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tight flow, shit got me tickling inside ..
your words jus make sense to me man.. i like dat shit.. keep flowin my brotha..mad props.. |
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03-21-03, 02:16 AM | #3 | |||||||
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i liked this one... i give it an 8/10... coulda been better, work more on your vocab, use big words... makes you sound smarter lol... not a masterpiece, but one of the works you keep.... keep rhymin
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03-21-03, 03:36 AM | #4 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Yo MDB, good to see you have figured out how to lay it out, took the caps lock off and pressed enter but dogg u really deserve to be gettin slept on, you keep postion yo rhymes but you aint commentin on everyone else, don't be a fucken sleeper out here, gotta give a little to get a little, this was alright, just stop sleepin!!!!
Peace Out!!!!!
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03-21-03, 04:10 AM | #5 | ||||||
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it was a good piece, heaps common though, u get more replies to topics that are original.. not pickin on u or ne thing though.. vocab was alil elementary but u had some good lines like...
i cant control all the cards startin to unfold/ so u gotta keep cut stay sharp try hard at ya goals/ and spray cans young artist you gotta start somewhere/ cause life witout artist man this world would be no where/ i like those lines.. keep spittin peace out |
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