Do I Exist ?
 

Taste the flavor of the sky As it filling my stomach
one thing that i know is always coming for something
Running across the field Stepping on the ledge of fate
I wish I had something more But I only see faith
where does the trace lead I'm blinding in reach of eve
every sec a dream waking to the existence of a dream
the seams bleed and the stars Cry in the bright night
wondering when where and why I might die this time
Inside my mind holding the eye sight when times right
my line of sight flies So high the ground is in heaven
God blessing me with the right weapon a lung present
the package is presence the sheer desire is unleashed
releasing words in several seconds of sound no cease
a pounds of peace around the streets sitting down in me
Settling on every inch of my inner skin i begin to itch
sometimes I pick the thoughts that don't even mean shit
within the fix they make more sense within bliss kissed
My cheek each week past time I see weak ass & find
that my wise are victim of pride inside each lie applied
I survive but I never end life is a eternal message sent
better spent on the mishaps and president pressure hint
The way the Letters are spent is the best medicines
Coming from the world Where I live with a better pen

Don't ignore

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hate this wack ass site

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this is ill

i dunno y people are ignoring

you need to convey ideas in a better way cos some lines are hard 2 understand

the flow was ill and the content was nice

fave lines:
Running across the field Stepping on the ledge of fate
I wish I had something more But I only see faith
where does the trace lead I'm blinding in reach of eve
every sec a dream waking to the existence of a dream


plz reply to one of my pieces

yea I was feelin this piece... fav bar/line:

every sec a dream waking to the existence of a dream

The Flow i give 8/10
COntend wus good Nice drop yo keep writing

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This was tight...8/10...not the worst iv read my far...just work on your wordplay....thats about it...

Good shit, keep droppin....

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