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03-27-03, 09:24 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Do I Exist ?
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Taste the flavor of the sky As it filling my stomach
one thing that i know is always coming for something Running across the field Stepping on the ledge of fate I wish I had something more But I only see faith where does the trace lead I'm blinding in reach of eve every sec a dream waking to the existence of a dream the seams bleed and the stars Cry in the bright night wondering when where and why I might die this time Inside my mind holding the eye sight when times right my line of sight flies So high the ground is in heaven God blessing me with the right weapon a lung present the package is presence the sheer desire is unleashed releasing words in several seconds of sound no cease a pounds of peace around the streets sitting down in me Settling on every inch of my inner skin i begin to itch sometimes I pick the thoughts that don't even mean shit within the fix they make more sense within bliss kissed My cheek each week past time I see weak ass & find that my wise are victim of pride inside each lie applied I survive but I never end life is a eternal message sent better spent on the mishaps and president pressure hint The way the Letters are spent is the best medicines Coming from the world Where I live with a better pen |
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03-27-03, 10:47 AM | #2 | ||||||
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Don't ignore
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03-27-03, 11:58 AM | #3 | ||||||
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up
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03-27-03, 12:55 PM | #4 | ||||||
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hate this wack ass site
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03-27-03, 03:17 PM | #5 | ||||||
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up
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03-27-03, 03:28 PM | #6 | ||||||
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this is ill
i dunno y people are ignoring you need to convey ideas in a better way cos some lines are hard 2 understand the flow was ill and the content was nice fave lines: Running across the field Stepping on the ledge of fate I wish I had something more But I only see faith where does the trace lead I'm blinding in reach of eve every sec a dream waking to the existence of a dream plz reply to one of my pieces |
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03-27-03, 04:00 PM | #7 | |||||||
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yea I was feelin this piece... fav bar/line:
every sec a dream waking to the existence of a dream |
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03-27-03, 04:08 PM | #8 | |||||||
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The Flow i give 8/10
COntend wus good Nice drop yo keep writing peep my shit Dedication to the Motherland
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03-27-03, 04:16 PM | #9 | ||||||
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This was tight...8/10...not the worst iv read my far...just work on your wordplay....thats about it...
Good shit, keep droppin.... P.e.a.c.e. |
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