NeWBiE...AuDi JuS STaRteD...GoT 3 SoNgz sO FaR...
 

....Judge & Feedback please...Ma SoNgs..

okay...

1. You need to speak the fuck up. You're mumblin on every track. If you're afraid what you're folks'll say either confront them so you're not worried about rappin, or do it when they're not home.

2. You're off beat. WAY off beat.

3. Rap about somethin you can relate to better. Don't try to come off as a gangster hard-ass when you're not.

WeLL...FiRsT oFF....I aint gunna argue cuz i DID ask for feedback...
,,,and Second oFF...Thanks for the feedback...O1nE!!

Wtf .. first off, turn up the god damn beat .. shit
SPEAK LOUDER .. sounds like your tryin not to wake
up your momz or some shit .. do both of what i
said then we'll talk about some decent feedback
lyrics and shit ..

AiGht...as fo the wakin part...yeah id did most of them around 4am..& shit...O1nE!!