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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
03-30-03, 05:08 PM
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NeWBiE...AuDi JuS STaRteD...GoT 3 SoNgz sO FaR...
IP: 656D C423
....Judge & Feedback please...Ma SoNgs..
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03-30-03, 10:03 PM
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IP: C987 F579
okay...
1. You need to speak the fuck up. You're mumblin on every track. If you're afraid what you're folks'll say either confront them so you're not worried about rappin, or do it when they're not home. 2. You're off beat. WAY off beat. 3. Rap about somethin you can relate to better. Don't try to come off as a gangster hard-ass when you're not. |
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03-30-03, 11:01 PM
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IP: 656D C423
WeLL...FiRsT oFF....I aint gunna argue cuz i DID ask for feedback...
,,,and Second oFF...Thanks for the feedback...O1nE!! |
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03-31-03, 07:50 AM
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IP: 41E6 F21D
Wtf .. first off, turn up the god damn beat .. shit
SPEAK LOUDER .. sounds like your tryin not to wake up your momz or some shit .. do both of what i said then we'll talk about some decent feedback lyrics and shit .. |
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03-31-03, 02:59 PM
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IP: 656D C423
AiGht...as fo the wakin part...yeah id did most of them around 4am..& shit...O1nE!!
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