Quick Spit ( some feedback would be nice)
 

everyone layin in their beds having no real understanding/
on wats really goin on in this world, wat projects bein planning//
The government as straight as a curve/
keepin the 'secret stuff' silent, not sayin' one word//
the criminal activities, the illicit all infected/
could of saved some buildings, from messages intercepted//
having a solution, being the answer to war/
corruption involved, only promises that they swore/
a blanket pulled over the eyes, as nothing is what we saw/
all this destruction, from all the projects before/
and for the future to come, we dont think of the beyond/
people thinkin for themselves no recognition of where they belong/
as no one notices the surroundings goin on/
as the dim light shinning, then darkened over a strobe/
no realisation that there are more of them in this globe/

hahah, thats nice ish bro, one of your best drops yet, if not your best man, the subject has been covered a fair bit here in Open Mic and this is one of the best pieces on the subject, know exactly what yo sayin dogg, good stuff, keep it up..... K.I!!

Peace Out Yo!!!!

Zzzzzzzzzzzz.... C'mon pplz please give me some feedback

dope shit, u need to post mo stuff like that

thanks doggs fo that feedback, c'mon ya'll give me somethin here

Good shit dawg that was tight as fuck good job.

**Mexicoz Shorty**

thanks for the replies uppin this last time ! hah
peace out...

nice lil drop, good topic. flow seemed a lil choppy at times but still good. lyrics werent to bad....keep spittin, and peep out my verse or battle por favor