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Old 04-01-03, 05:05 AM   #1
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Quick Spit ( some feedback would be nice)

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everyone layin in their beds having no real understanding/
on wats really goin on in this world, wat projects bein planning//
The government as straight as a curve/
keepin the 'secret stuff' silent, not sayin' one word//
the criminal activities, the illicit all infected/
could of saved some buildings, from messages intercepted//
having a solution, being the answer to war/
corruption involved, only promises that they swore/
a blanket pulled over the eyes, as nothing is what we saw/
all this destruction, from all the projects before/
and for the future to come, we dont think of the beyond/
people thinkin for themselves no recognition of where they belong/
as no one notices the surroundings goin on/
as the dim light shinning, then darkened over a strobe/
no realisation that there are more of them in this globe/
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Old 04-01-03, 05:10 AM   #2
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hahah, thats nice ish bro, one of your best drops yet, if not your best man, the subject has been covered a fair bit here in Open Mic and this is one of the best pieces on the subject, know exactly what yo sayin dogg, good stuff, keep it up..... K.I!!

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Old 04-01-03, 05:51 AM   #3
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Zzzzzzzzzzzz.... C'mon pplz please give me some feedback
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Old 04-01-03, 06:26 AM   #4
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dope shit, u need to post mo stuff like that
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Old 04-01-03, 06:54 AM   #5
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thanks doggs fo that feedback, c'mon ya'll give me somethin here
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Old 04-01-03, 11:46 AM   #6
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Good shit dawg that was tight as fuck good job.

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Old 04-02-03, 01:36 AM   #7
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thanks for the replies uppin this last time ! hah
peace out...
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Old 04-02-03, 01:50 AM   #8
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nice lil drop, good topic. flow seemed a lil choppy at times but still good. lyrics werent to bad....keep spittin, and peep out my verse or battle por favor
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