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Sleep Tonight
you think that your ill, meet me in a battle/
round 1....., I'll slaughter you like cattle/ Its no use take em' off the stage/ its to much abuse listening to him getting played/ I came in a rage and attitude to attack/ Habbits attatched , crazy cracker rap/ it doesnt matter tell your dad im a white singer/ He'll forget the parental advisory sticker/ I think that I've had to much beer and licker/ cause the choice of my hoe keeps getting bigger/ when I rap they say its fantastic/ 90 percent of my fan base is attics/ my first concert was in rehab classes/ had an after party with some raygay rappers/ to some no-dohs and a bunch of stackers/ spike the punch, left and went quackers/ EVERY BODY SCARED OF THE ANTI-CHRIST IM NOT, I WANT TO SLEEP TONIGHT I DONT CARE IF I GET SHOT OR DIE I JUST NEED SOME SLEEP TONIGHT! |
try to work on vocabualry.. this peice could have used it and wordplay a little to simple for my liking.. Keep Elevating OoNnEe
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looked like u did wut alotta ppl do,jus put words on tha end to Rhyme.Not coo @ all mink.Its obvious this wuznt a topical verse but it wuz almost babblin.Jus work on dat sh!t sum more.Stay ^
-Avi |
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