you think that your ill, meet me in a battle/
round 1....., I'll slaughter you like cattle/
Its no use take em' off the stage/
its to much abuse listening to him getting played/
I came in a rage and attitude to attack/
Habbits attatched , crazy cracker rap/
it doesnt matter tell your dad im a white singer/
He'll forget the parental advisory sticker/
I think that I've had to much beer and licker/
cause the choice of my hoe keeps getting bigger/
when I rap they say its fantastic/
90 percent of my fan base is attics/
my first concert was in rehab classes/
had an after party with some raygay rappers/
to some no-dohs and a bunch of stackers/
spike the punch, left and went quackers/

EVERY BODY SCARED OF THE ANTI-CHRIST
IM NOT, I WANT TO SLEEP TONIGHT
I DONT CARE IF I GET SHOT OR DIE
I JUST NEED SOME SLEEP TONIGHT!

try to work on vocabualry.. this peice could have used it and wordplay a little to simple for my liking.. Keep Elevating OoNnEe

looked like u did wut alotta ppl do,jus put words on tha end to Rhyme.Not coo @ all mink.Its obvious this wuznt a topical verse but it wuz almost babblin.Jus work on dat sh!t sum more.Stay ^
-Avi