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Racism
Quick...10 min freestyle (10 bars)
Alotta timez peeps mistake racism for whites juss hatin on blacks// but if a kracka's dressed ghetto…they're wearin tha rong slacks?// Racism iz on both sidez…not juss tha known frat// Started wit tha whites nd tha colors striked back// Ion see why we can't accept a person fo who they exact// As a country, we needa elap, formin 1 undefeatable tap//(clique/crew) Government ensured us of racial equality…still nothin like that// Them assclowns fucked us over again…we got 'bitch slapped'// but that's not tha point…blacks n whites should learn ta live togetha// In this world it rains, snows n hails…Togetha = no matta tha weatha// Btw, i'm black... Gimme some feedback plz -Thanks |
well good topic wack rhyme
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iight...we'll see wut others think
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you know thats was a nice rhyme to me...it was'nt that deep but you got ya point across.... I feel it....
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Wasnt too bad but it will make you a better rapper to rhyme by syllabals instead of shit that just sounds nice.
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iight..Thanks fa the feedback nd tha advice
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good topic, which is the most important aspect of writing rhymes. but in terms of lyrical content and length it needs improving.
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flow there
topic there content loacked but was worth reading |
.It's O.k..
This joint was o.k., a little basic on the vocabulary. Like man before me said, it's a good topic. Just work on your vocab. Make a little longer too...
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coo' drop fam
what u said was true just thro some multies in there next time man ;) u know we got this on lock |
Thanks peepz..this wuz just a 10 min key i wrote in science class...it wuz meant ta be "short"
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uppin..want more feedback
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that shit was weak....and BTW..... im black 2
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Yea ok...
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Wasnt feelin this drop ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i seen u do better legend , , ,oh yeah i kno why this drop is whack , , because it was a 10min key
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