16 years...
 

I'm lookin' back on my life and I don't like what I see
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
What will I amount to? I haven't chosen a path
All of these emotions sitting in my bath
Gigi said "I know you'll be great." She believed in me
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
2nd string football player on a crappy team
10 weeks wasted from living Gigi's dream
Haven't picked a school probably won't
Dad wants me to be a doctor, I don't
Mom wants me to be a scientist, I won't
What's wrong with them, why can't they see
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
Gigi, I'm nothing special I'm just an average guy
I wish I could have told you that before you died
Why must I bear this awful load
To have to be great is an awful thing to bode
But when I look at myself this is all I see
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
I have to live that dream, it was her last request
I now bear this burden on my chest
I will not take failure I must be the best
But I have no clue how the hell that'll be
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be

Gigi is my Great Grandma GG=Gigi

What ya'll think

Yo I know it's weak, but come on give me some feedback.

it was pretty good :)

....not as good as sum of ur otha shit...kinda repeated ur self at times....but i was feelin it....much respect

Mad my dawg nice shit didnt know u wus poetic

Been one forever, that's what started me on rapping.

this was simple....deep and interesting....i liked it..


i feel yah mad man ive writing poetry all and that helps me a lot when i write rhymes...

do ur thing...hopin to see more of u work

keep droppin!

it was weak




















heres where you thought i was gunna say j/k str8 poem......





































j/k str8 poem

lol thanks Kapone ^^^