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16 years...
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I'm lookin' back on my life and I don't like what I see
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be What will I amount to? I haven't chosen a path All of these emotions sitting in my bath Gigi said "I know you'll be great." She believed in me 16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be 2nd string football player on a crappy team 10 weeks wasted from living Gigi's dream Haven't picked a school probably won't Dad wants me to be a doctor, I don't Mom wants me to be a scientist, I won't What's wrong with them, why can't they see 16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be Gigi, I'm nothing special I'm just an average guy I wish I could have told you that before you died Why must I bear this awful load To have to be great is an awful thing to bode But when I look at myself this is all I see 16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be I have to live that dream, it was her last request I now bear this burden on my chest I will not take failure I must be the best But I have no clue how the hell that'll be 16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be Gigi is my Great Grandma GG=Gigi What ya'll think
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Jee-You Knit?
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Yo I know it's weak, but come on give me some feedback.
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better- ![]() Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion |
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it was pretty good
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....not as good as sum of ur otha shit...kinda repeated ur self at times....but i was feelin it....much respect
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WarLord
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Mad my dawg nice shit didnt know u wus poetic
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I Came Back Like Bustin Nuts On Spinal Chords Try Me Mofuckaz............ |
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Jee-You Knit?
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IP: F75A 411A
Been one forever, that's what started me on rapping.
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better- ![]() Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion |
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Tampons are expensive
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this was simple....deep and interesting....i liked it..
i feel yah mad man ive writing poetry all and that helps me a lot when i write rhymes... do ur thing...hopin to see more of u work keep droppin!
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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BANNED - Pink Slipped
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it was weak
heres where you thought i was gunna say j/k str8 poem...... j/k str8 poem |
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Jee-You Knit?
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IP: F75A 411A
lol thanks Kapone ^^^
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<table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>MadMan</table>
-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better- ![]() Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion |
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