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j.smith hk,la,f4 V.s CarsonJet
10-20 lines
no dik votes no crew votes ************* ill hit this up in bout 10 mins wit sum shit peace |
j.smith hk,la,f4
10-20 lines k chek it..... j.smith..damn here we go again anotha (rap artist/8mile) wannabe// Eminem is only one, u cant be him, dun try an revert clock bak chronicly// all there be these days, is yo type, in dis rb site// half da niggas included u couldnt bear da night, wit out a candle light, sike// Its only u that fears da darkeness, when it kreeps deep within// afta dis battle ya soul be yurnin deep writtins, within da holy karyn// cus what ya thro in ya post is insanity ontoppa sin// couldnt get a lie outta me fo forty multiples of fin//(40X$5=$200.oo) u outta be shunned, lyricly stripped of ya rap techno flo// couldnt turn heads in da club if ya were frosted wit a nuclear glow// an yo what up wit dat hk la f4??// writing that shit in for yo battle was a motha fuken chore// buy a seed from da rap nursery an grow a stage name// hk ala fuk u motha fuka... be a nice way o sayin yo name be a strain// jus glancin at dat shit sent nucleic nerve signals tearin thru my vains// jus makin me feel like hittin verse's harder, increasin ya pain// rappin 101 is finished wit yo name.. so u be dismissed// chance o winnin dis battle behind a summer wit christmass// goddamn 8mile wanna be kracka misfits// peace.... |
uppin for j.smith...hit this today please..this is really stupid how i have to write extra just to up for a battle....absolutely ridiculouse....i hope im at 100 characters now..DAMN
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that shit was nice kid
check my shit out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=44685 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=44784 |
certainly betta than the other post. this will b a better battle for sure.
whilst u waitin check dis out and vote. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2198#post412198 |
uppin for j.smith...hit this today please..this is really stupid how i have to write extra just to up for a battle....absolutely ridiculouse....i hope im at 100 characters now..DAMN
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uppin for j.smith...hit this today please..this is really stupid how i have to write extra just to up for a battle....absolutely ridiculouse....i hope im at 100 characters now..DAMN
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THUG LIFE SAYS, JUST FUCK'EM ALL- PAC
Right outa the gate my flows-sharp like poison tipped blow-darts, I'll pry open your throat-scar with a crow-bar hoping you choke-hard, Fuck what the votes-are Carsonjet wrote-bars that barely broke-par, Long as Carsonjet is in a "crew" then the politically correct name would be "No-Stars," So-far J.smith mirracle-sentences, Define perfectly what literal-vengeance-is, Putting opponents like Carsonjet through spiritual-hemorrhages, Damn already this kids-shocked his shits-knocked outa the piss-pot, Fuckin reformed faggot I bet you miss-cock, You beating me? come back "Down To Earth" like you Chris-Rock, Carsonjet a no-name-fake who wont-make-rank, Cause there never was any flames in his pro-pane-tank, Your whole-brain-aches with numbness, So mentally slow your whack rhymes expose your dumbness, Stupidly using stars an parenthesis to explain your lame-punches, In prison terms my words like shank-lunges piercing to blood stain-stomachs, Abdomen pain-crunches your weak back breaks-from-it, Carsonjet is likely to leave similar to the way Notre-Dame-huntches, Your fame-plummets cause I find its easier to burn you than one calorie, Your red, white, & blue text gets trampled over by Confederate horsemen an cavalry, My raps do laps around you while your rhymes-barely-pivot, J.smith is the number 1 Carsonjet would be a place holding zero if compared to binary-digits, If we battled 10 times you'd still come out short like barbershop buzzcuts of nine-hairy-midgets**** |
yo lets jus finish dis poll off an end dis battle.....uppin ta end this...drop ya link an ill return the favor .....
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yo lets jus finish dis poll off an end dis battle.....uppin ta end this...drop ya link an ill return the favor .....
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ight. first off i wanna say that Carson you have gotten a whole lot better since you first started. as for the battle........it was pretty close.....couldnt tell just by reading through imma break it down
punches=carson flow=J vocab=J multis=carson wordplay=J vote= J good battle return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46014 |
VOTE = CARSONJET
REASON: It wuz pretty close but i think carson's structure came inta part wit my decision...j.smith's linez were a lil short at timez nd hard ta flow to...carson had a lil betta punches also... ^^TITE BATTLE Return tha favor nd vote on my batte wit g.u.b: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45952 |
uppin for votes, i want tha world to see, good spit carsonjet lets keep tha votes comming////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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ok.....i didnt intend on a frigin crew member comin in an voting on my shit so it really 1-0 j.smith......uppin for votes to close this thread.....please POLL....leave a link...i will return the favor
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ill hit this battle up fa sho if u yall come an hit my battle up brabbit vs newrapper http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=2
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