10-20 lines
no dik votes
no crew votes
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ill hit this up in bout 10 mins wit sum shit peace

j.smith hk,la,f4
10-20 lines

k chek it.....

j.smith..damn here we go again anotha (rap artist/8mile) wannabe//
Eminem is only one, u cant be him, dun try an revert clock bak chronicly//
all there be these days, is yo type, in dis rb site//
half da niggas included u couldnt bear da night, wit out a candle light, sike//
Its only u that fears da darkeness, when it kreeps deep within//
afta dis battle ya soul be yurnin deep writtins, within da holy karyn//
cus what ya thro in ya post is insanity ontoppa sin//
couldnt get a lie outta me fo forty multiples of fin//(40X$5=$200.oo)
u outta be shunned, lyricly stripped of ya rap techno flo//
couldnt turn heads in da club if ya were frosted wit a nuclear glow//
an yo what up wit dat hk la f4??//
writing that shit in for yo battle was a motha fuken chore//
buy a seed from da rap nursery an grow a stage name//
hk ala fuk u motha fuka... be a nice way o sayin yo name be a strain//
jus glancin at dat shit sent nucleic nerve signals tearin thru my vains//
jus makin me feel like hittin verse's harder, increasin ya pain//
rappin 101 is finished wit yo name.. so u be dismissed//
chance o winnin dis battle behind a summer wit christmass//
goddamn 8mile wanna be kracka misfits//


peace....

uppin for j.smith...hit this today please..this is really stupid how i have to write extra just to up for a battle....absolutely ridiculouse....i hope im at 100 characters now..DAMN

that shit was nice kid
check my shit out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=44685
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=44784

certainly betta than the other post. this will b a better battle for sure.

whilst u waitin check dis out and vote.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2198#post412198

uppin for j.smith...hit this today please..this is really stupid how i have to write extra just to up for a battle....absolutely ridiculouse....i hope im at 100 characters now..DAMN

uppin for j.smith...hit this today please..this is really stupid how i have to write extra just to up for a battle....absolutely ridiculouse....i hope im at 100 characters now..DAMN

THUG LIFE SAYS, JUST FUCK'EM ALL- PAC

Right outa the gate my flows-sharp like poison tipped blow-darts,
I'll pry open your throat-scar with a crow-bar hoping you choke-hard,
Fuck what the votes-are Carsonjet wrote-bars that barely broke-par,
Long as Carsonjet is in a "crew" then the politically correct name would be "No-Stars,"
So-far J.smith mirracle-sentences,
Define perfectly what literal-vengeance-is,
Putting opponents like Carsonjet through spiritual-hemorrhages,
Damn already this kids-shocked his shits-knocked outa the piss-pot,
Fuckin reformed faggot I bet you miss-cock,
You beating me? come back "Down To Earth" like you Chris-Rock,
Carsonjet a no-name-fake who wont-make-rank,
Cause there never was any flames in his pro-pane-tank,
Your whole-brain-aches with numbness,
So mentally slow your whack rhymes expose your dumbness,
Stupidly using stars an parenthesis to explain your lame-punches,
In prison terms my words like shank-lunges piercing to blood stain-stomachs,
Abdomen pain-crunches your weak back breaks-from-it,
Carsonjet is likely to leave similar to the way Notre-Dame-huntches,
Your fame-plummets cause I find its easier to burn you than one calorie,
Your red, white, & blue text gets trampled over by Confederate horsemen an cavalry,
My raps do laps around you while your rhymes-barely-pivot,
J.smith is the number 1 Carsonjet would be a place holding zero if compared to binary-digits,
If we battled 10 times you'd still come out short like barbershop buzzcuts of nine-hairy-midgets****

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RESPECT MY GANGSTA, YOU BITCH ASS NIGGA

yo lets jus finish dis poll off an end dis battle.....uppin ta end this...drop ya link an ill return the favor .....

yo lets jus finish dis poll off an end dis battle.....uppin ta end this...drop ya link an ill return the favor .....

ight. first off i wanna say that Carson you have gotten a whole lot better since you first started. as for the battle........it was pretty close.....couldnt tell just by reading through imma break it down

punches=carson
flow=J
vocab=J
multis=carson
wordplay=J

vote= J

good battle


return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46014

VOTE = CARSONJET

REASON: It wuz pretty close but i think carson's structure came inta part wit my decision...j.smith's linez were a lil short at timez nd hard ta flow to...carson had a lil betta punches also...

^^TITE BATTLE

Return tha favor nd vote on my batte wit g.u.b:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45952

uppin for votes, i want tha world to see, good spit carsonjet lets keep tha votes comming////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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ok.....i didnt intend on a frigin crew member comin in an voting on my shit so it really 1-0 j.smith......uppin for votes to close this thread.....please POLL....leave a link...i will return the favor