Shit On YOU!
 

Look ey yo! Im new around here, so Im about to make an impact!


Somtimes I just feel like im one fire and I want to die!/
Somtimes I just lay there and look up to the sky/
Im just a regular guy. I dream I can fly! Man I feel high/
It feels like Im on top of the battle cry, its all me/
I came here illegally, and frankly I dont give a fuck/
All I know is you people are sayin I suck/
But I dont give a fuck. Ill just smile and listen/
Cause pretty soon yall this ass u will be kissin/
Ill be doin the dissen so u just sit back and listen/
Ya see these teethe they glissin, and they do my pissen/
Its clear to me now, yall think im a cow! But I aint im ur pal/
If it wasnt for me! There wouldnt be no rap battle thing for u G/
So just sit on your ass! And watch me rap real fast/
This is the cast? Shit yall this wont last/
Im from KM and they are from first till last/
Im new there too, and I aint no damn foo/
Ill hit yall over the head with my shoe, oops! You have a boo boo/
I know yall aint jews. Im makin my stew. Ill give u some too/
Im here now! Now yall know me. I know I am half bad
my mom already told me/



This is just a enter thingy. Nothin to worry about. This is me.

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Yo that shit was nice man stay up.

^^^^why do u keep giving dem short ass Replies......................Its like u dont even read tha verse

Why you on my nuts?

hey yo this was nothin less then terrible dog, i know it was from the heart but damn if it sounded that bad this should have been the roughdraft and you should spit or post the final na mean.

^^yarg what synopsist said,take more time,it seems kinda rushed....elevation no doubt will help,keep writing and posting and youll get up there soon enough....but jsut a word of advice,dont come in here on our first post claimin you gonna make an impact,youll get hated straight out...keep posting..

It was good. Well said. But yeah, take the advice that Aterack Define gave, and you'll be all G. Keep flowin.

this was a wacky verse, you were too simplistic in your ryhming structure,!

kinda wack dude. but do sumat about it. study and elevate ull be dope some day
peace

That was pretty shitty