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05-21-03, 10:47 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Shit On YOU!
IP: 7BA3 A129
Look ey yo! Im new around here, so Im about to make an impact!
Somtimes I just feel like im one fire and I want to die!/ Somtimes I just lay there and look up to the sky/ Im just a regular guy. I dream I can fly! Man I feel high/ It feels like Im on top of the battle cry, its all me/ I came here illegally, and frankly I dont give a fuck/ All I know is you people are sayin I suck/ But I dont give a fuck. Ill just smile and listen/ Cause pretty soon yall this ass u will be kissin/ Ill be doin the dissen so u just sit back and listen/ Ya see these teethe they glissin, and they do my pissen/ Its clear to me now, yall think im a cow! But I aint im ur pal/ If it wasnt for me! There wouldnt be no rap battle thing for u G/ So just sit on your ass! And watch me rap real fast/ This is the cast? Shit yall this wont last/ Im from KM and they are from first till last/ Im new there too, and I aint no damn foo/ Ill hit yall over the head with my shoe, oops! You have a boo boo/ I know yall aint jews. Im makin my stew. Ill give u some too/ Im here now! Now yall know me. I know I am half bad my mom already told me/ This is just a enter thingy. Nothin to worry about. This is me. |
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05-21-03, 10:56 PM | #2 | |||||||
BANNED for biting
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IP: FF98 53B8
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05-21-03, 11:02 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 8277 30E9
Yo that shit was nice man stay up.
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05-21-03, 11:05 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: FF98 53B8
^^^^why do u keep giving dem short ass Replies......................Its like u dont even read tha verse
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05-21-03, 11:32 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 8277 30E9
Why you on my nuts?
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05-22-03, 03:20 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: CEF5 716F
hey yo this was nothin less then terrible dog, i know it was from the heart but damn if it sounded that bad this should have been the roughdraft and you should spit or post the final na mean.
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05-22-03, 05:20 AM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 3FF9 C72A
^^yarg what synopsist said,take more time,it seems kinda rushed....elevation no doubt will help,keep writing and posting and youll get up there soon enough....but jsut a word of advice,dont come in here on our first post claimin you gonna make an impact,youll get hated straight out...keep posting..
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05-22-03, 05:28 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 5C5E CC78
It was good. Well said. But yeah, take the advice that Aterack Define gave, and you'll be all G. Keep flowin.
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05-22-03, 06:21 AM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 3502 CD32
this was a wacky verse, you were too simplistic in your ryhming structure,!
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05-22-03, 09:05 AM | #10 | |||||||
BANNED For Being An Idiot
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IP: C22E FA17
kinda wack dude. but do sumat about it. study and elevate ull be dope some day
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05-22-03, 10:15 AM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: 8E62 0611
That was pretty shitty
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