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~RuThLEss~ 06-02-03 05:12 PM

~Who Am I~
 
Aight am not here to offend any religion am just wanna rep mine feeel me........



I am a Muslim man
Feel free to ask me why
When I walk,
I walk with dignity
When I speak
I do not lie

I am a Muslim Man
Some will hate me and some will agree
But what you should appreciate
Is that the choice I make is free

I'm not plagued with depression
I'm neither cheated nor abused
I don't envy other human being
And I'm certainly not confused

Note, I speak perfect English
Et un petit peu de Francais aussi
I'm majoring in Linguistics
So you need not speak slowly

I run my own small business
Every cent I earn is mine
I drive my Chevy to school & work
And no, that's not a crime!



Muslim womens Imputent ppl often stare as they walk by
You don't understand their veil
But peace and power we all have found
As I am equal to any other male!

I am a Muslim man
So please don't pity me
For God has guided me to truth
And now I'm finally free!


Done deal.....................Yo this didnt use alot of Big Vocab i did this in 10 to 15 minutes aprox.......And yes this wus not tha best of my open mics believe it or not...lol

Bmack 06-02-03 05:22 PM

I'm muslim too uppin this joint..feel you bro..

DaviD WoRdplay 06-02-03 06:32 PM

you should post this one in the Poerty section....

deep as hell kid!!

this piece is hott.....


Uppin' this

Reno Starr 06-02-03 06:41 PM

Yea I have seen better, im not to sure I was feeling it but its not cause of the reilgious side cause I go to church. It was deep and I could tell it was from the heart but wasnt feeling it like your other drops.

~RuThLEss~ 06-02-03 07:05 PM

^^^^^^^^^THANX TO ALL YA FOR THE FEEDBACK AND READING MY PIECE i know this wusnt my best like R X said already.........


UPPUN

Dez 06-02-03 07:34 PM

even though im not Muslim this was a good drop cause you were reppin what you believe....respect

Mental God 06-02-03 08:05 PM

you should move this to poetry section ruth, but it was good, some of the best drops are just whats on ur mind. good shit, peep my shit

~RuThLEss~ 06-02-03 08:11 PM

HAs already Being Moved.....................TO Poetry section.......lol

THanks for the Feedbacks Yo.........................

~RuThLEss~ 06-03-03 12:52 AM

UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

EnVy Ny 06-03-03 10:43 AM

yea dat shit was hot classic........................................... .................................................. .........

Enigmatic 06-03-03 11:35 AM

.Point of View.
 
I'm feelin' this shit. Like them other niggas said, you said what you wanted to say, and repped your religion. You weren't scared to tell how you roll. That's hot son. Vocab. and flow were on point too, that always helps, ha, ha. Uppin' this joint!

~RuThLEss~ 06-03-03 07:44 PM

THANKS FAM............................................... I APRECIATE THE FEEDBACK

~RuThLEss~ 06-04-03 05:32 AM

UPPUN.....

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