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06-02-03, 05:12 PM
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~Who Am I~
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Aight am not here to offend any religion am just wanna rep mine feeel me........
I am a Muslim man Feel free to ask me why When I walk, I walk with dignity When I speak I do not lie I am a Muslim Man Some will hate me and some will agree But what you should appreciate Is that the choice I make is free I'm not plagued with depression I'm neither cheated nor abused I don't envy other human being And I'm certainly not confused Note, I speak perfect English Et un petit peu de Francais aussi I'm majoring in Linguistics So you need not speak slowly I run my own small business Every cent I earn is mine I drive my Chevy to school & work And no, that's not a crime! Muslim womens Imputent ppl often stare as they walk by You don't understand their veil But peace and power we all have found As I am equal to any other male! I am a Muslim man So please don't pity me For God has guided me to truth And now I'm finally free! Done deal.....................Yo this didnt use alot of Big Vocab i did this in 10 to 15 minutes aprox.......And yes this wus not tha best of my open mics believe it or not...lol
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06-02-03, 05:22 PM
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IP:
I'm muslim too uppin this joint..feel you bro..
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06-02-03, 06:32 PM
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IP:
you should post this one in the Poerty section....
deep as hell kid!! this piece is hott..... Uppin' this |
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06-02-03, 06:41 PM
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IP:
Yea I have seen better, im not to sure I was feeling it but its not cause of the reilgious side cause I go to church. It was deep and I could tell it was from the heart but wasnt feeling it like your other drops.
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06-02-03, 07:05 PM
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IP:
^^^^^^^^^THANX TO ALL YA FOR THE FEEDBACK AND READING MY PIECE i know this wusnt my best like R X said already.........
UPPUN
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06-02-03, 07:34 PM
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IP:
even though im not Muslim this was a good drop cause you were reppin what you believe....respect
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06-02-03, 08:05 PM
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IP:
you should move this to poetry section ruth, but it was good, some of the best drops are just whats on ur mind. good shit, peep my shit
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06-02-03, 08:11 PM
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IP:
HAs already Being Moved.....................TO Poetry section.......lol
THanks for the Feedbacks Yo.........................
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06-03-03, 12:52 AM
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IP:
UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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06-03-03, 10:43 AM
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IP:
yea dat shit was hot classic........................................... .................................................. .........
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06-03-03, 11:35 AM
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.Point of View.
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I'm feelin' this shit. Like them other niggas said, you said what you wanted to say, and repped your religion. You weren't scared to tell how you roll. That's hot son. Vocab. and flow were on point too, that always helps, ha, ha. Uppin' this joint!
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06-03-03, 07:44 PM
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IP:
THANKS FAM............................................... I APRECIATE THE FEEDBACK
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06-04-03, 05:32 AM
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IP:
UPPUN.....
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