"This that I have".. (song) deep, mad word-play and vocab
 

ferocious focus, mind set on the moment knowin' tha closeness.//
I can feel it, I know it's near--> it's spirit fills I'm fearless.//
skills. period, my will's serious. I will not fail.//
inconsistancies second rate! in tha first place I'm tempting fate.//
if I don't make it I'm shamed, fall into a depression of pitty and self-blame.//
but there's no way, I'm ready for anything, bring on the stress.//
the pressure, tha glare 'n' hype, perilous heights.//
I ain't scared-a this ice, I want it, I need it.//
teaming with desire, with this task completed this teen'll be admired.//
inspired by greats, it seemed dire to try'n be higher in place.//
escapin' this hatred, I've been more than patient, I need ta just take-it.//
ceize what I'm faced with before it's past, like a last chance.//
forgotten like past lands, monumental in comparrison to tha sunken atlantis.//
I'm-a only stop when I have it....//

what I got can't be described.//
flourishing like fresh buds, takin' me high.//
elevation at an insane pace.//
this is the revelation, I'm takin' my place.//

What is this place, it's amazing, I'm gazing into the haze.//
contemplating relations, creatin' incantations in a sense.//
rich in essence, my presence finally present, no more ability opression.//
mobility has set in, reliability on this reality a past dream.//
I've achieved mass schemes, latched weak and re-lapsed heat.//
I'm great, my life's been written I'm only here to narrorate.//
noticed like an air-rade... droppin' bombs.//
before I was off-n-on, now when I cough it's hot.//
like I lost my spot, but found a new page.//
fresh start, this flesh art, raw like playin' flesh darts with fresh hearts.// (fuckin' virgins)
detach foes life lines like a psycic in the right mind.//
handin' out random death cards when I write with my mind.//
my kind sublime, superior, inferior lyricals erupt in furors.//
no emcee purer..

Blunt this shit was nice yo
But you problably already new that though

ya.. I'm lookin' 4 better feedback, like how to improve, what it needs and shit... tha's cool tho, atleast people feelin' me

.Wordplay.
 

Ha, ha... wreckin' the boards as usual my nigga. The wordplay on this shit was very, very, very hot. Not many so-called "m.c.'s" on this site know about that shit. They spit just to spit. HOLLA.

uppin'...

uppin fuckers

aiight some good accentives and i liked the wordplay but i wasn't feelin the topic as much but i guess it's personel, nice piece.
check my shiiii playa
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uppin'..

this was a pretty decent drop.... not up to par with the usual shit you drop.....

wow.. I thought it was better.. thx for feedback, I was try'n yet another new style... so I guess I should go back

Blunt this Piece was Nice dawg..............I like this style.........Nice Multies and wordplay..........Keep spittin dawg