ferocious focus, mind set on the moment knowin' tha closeness.//
I can feel it, I know it's near--> it's spirit fills I'm fearless.//
skills. period, my will's serious. I will not fail.//
inconsistancies second rate! in tha first place I'm tempting fate.//
if I don't make it I'm shamed, fall into a depression of pitty and self-blame.//
but there's no way, I'm ready for anything, bring on the stress.//
the pressure, tha glare 'n' hype, perilous heights.//
I ain't scared-a this ice, I want it, I need it.//
teaming with desire, with this task completed this teen'll be admired.//
inspired by greats, it seemed dire to try'n be higher in place.//
escapin' this hatred, I've been more than patient, I need ta just take-it.//
ceize what I'm faced with before it's past, like a last chance.//
forgotten like past lands, monumental in comparrison to tha sunken atlantis.//
I'm-a only stop when I have it....//

what I got can't be described.//
flourishing like fresh buds, takin' me high.//
elevation at an insane pace.//
this is the revelation, I'm takin' my place.//

What is this place, it's amazing, I'm gazing into the haze.//
contemplating relations, creatin' incantations in a sense.//
rich in essence, my presence finally present, no more ability opression.//
mobility has set in, reliability on this reality a past dream.//
I've achieved mass schemes, latched weak and re-lapsed heat.//
I'm great, my life's been written I'm only here to narrorate.//
noticed like an air-rade... droppin' bombs.//
before I was off-n-on, now when I cough it's hot.//
like I lost my spot, but found a new page.//
fresh start, this flesh art, raw like playin' flesh darts with fresh hearts.// (fuckin' virgins)
detach foes life lines like a psycic in the right mind.//
handin' out random death cards when I write with my mind.//
my kind sublime, superior, inferior lyricals erupt in furors.//
no emcee purer..

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Blunt this shit was nice yo
But you problably already new that though

ya.. I'm lookin' 4 better feedback, like how to improve, what it needs and shit... tha's cool tho, atleast people feelin' me

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Ha, ha... wreckin' the boards as usual my nigga. The wordplay on this shit was very, very, very hot. Not many so-called "m.c.'s" on this site know about that shit. They spit just to spit. HOLLA.

uppin'...

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uppin fuckers

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aiight some good accentives and i liked the wordplay but i wasn't feelin the topic as much but i guess it's personel, nice piece.
check my shiiii playa
~1~

uppin'..

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this was a pretty decent drop.... not up to par with the usual shit you drop.....

wow.. I thought it was better.. thx for feedback, I was try'n yet another new style... so I guess I should go back

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