Freestyle about Jae Hood or Lloyd banks
 

you choose

but why?

loyd banks hell come at you like an army tank
none of you are up to his rank
he went from robbin stores to robbin banks
hell shoot you.. point blank
if he doesnt shoot you youll get shanked

Listen closely I-wissy, Lloyd Banks, Tony Yayo and Fifty
all bring tha hot flows fo' cheesy/ GGGGGG- G-Unit, in tha
rap game livin it up and murderin tha I.N.C on wax so easy/
Dre, Em and tha Aftermath/Shady camp are keepin it real,
bringin tha steel, while Irv Gotti, and Ja bitches are
keepin it sleazy/ Ashanti singin tha same songs over
and over with Ja Fuck in tha hook, all their shit is wack,
GGGGG-Unit are keepin it greasy/ It's pitiful, like a ninfo who
is not satisfied with her man askin me " come on I know u
can please me/

Ha, what y'all think bout that short lil freestyle?

Franchise Player

its cool but your sentences are to long it doesnt go with the flow

not hating just advice .....shorten it because its in text see
if we could hear you say it it would be better because oyu go through it faster but since were not it makes people not want to read it