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06-13-03, 03:38 PM
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Freestyle about Jae Hood or Lloyd banks
IP: BC99 309D
you choose
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06-17-03, 01:51 PM
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IP: 7C7D 881C
but why?
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06-24-03, 03:14 AM
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IP: F50B FC50
loyd banks hell come at you like an army tank
none of you are up to his rank he went from robbin stores to robbin banks hell shoot you.. point blank if he doesnt shoot you youll get shanked |
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06-24-03, 03:46 AM
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IP: 9D7D 3187
Listen closely I-wissy, Lloyd Banks, Tony Yayo and Fifty
all bring tha hot flows fo' cheesy/ GGGGGG- G-Unit, in tha rap game livin it up and murderin tha I.N.C on wax so easy/ Dre, Em and tha Aftermath/Shady camp are keepin it real, bringin tha steel, while Irv Gotti, and Ja bitches are keepin it sleazy/ Ashanti singin tha same songs over and over with Ja Fuck in tha hook, all their shit is wack, GGGGG-Unit are keepin it greasy/ It's pitiful, like a ninfo who is not satisfied with her man askin me " come on I know u can please me/ Ha, what y'all think bout that short lil freestyle? Franchise Player |
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06-24-03, 06:34 PM
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IP: F50B FC50
its cool but your sentences are to long it doesnt go with the flow
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06-24-03, 06:36 PM
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IP: F50B FC50
not hating just advice .....shorten it because its in text see
if we could hear you say it it would be better because oyu go through it faster but since were not it makes people not want to read it |
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