what up?
 

what up? what yall think?


Half the time people talk i dont listen/
because these drugs got me in an unnatural position/
they got me wishin/
theat i can just stay here because i hate the brutality/
of reality/
got me wantin ta stay in a drug prone imortality/
and its sad/
this world got me goin mad/
but im not one of these kids that can just blame it on mom and dad/
i just do it cause i like it/
and i cant fight it/
i know its wrong but i do it despite it/

try to make ur lines same syllables it sounds better

make it flow. instead of the way you had it with

one line//
another that rhymed like this//
then//
this sorta stuff//

make it//
like this//
get what//
im sayin?//