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06-13-03, 06:58 PM | #1 | ||||||
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what up?
IP: D6A9 FFD0
what up? what yall think?
Half the time people talk i dont listen/ because these drugs got me in an unnatural position/ they got me wishin/ theat i can just stay here because i hate the brutality/ of reality/ got me wantin ta stay in a drug prone imortality/ and its sad/ this world got me goin mad/ but im not one of these kids that can just blame it on mom and dad/ i just do it cause i like it/ and i cant fight it/ i know its wrong but i do it despite it/ |
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06-13-03, 11:47 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 8B9F F036
try to make ur lines same syllables it sounds better
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06-14-03, 01:53 AM | #3 | |||||||
BANNED - Pink Slipped
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IP: 9F91 B0D6
make it flow. instead of the way you had it with
one line// another that rhymed like this// then// this sorta stuff// make it// like this// get what// im sayin?// |
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