BRE Presents : Main Attraction[YoungGadget Diss]
 

Sights-Centered Twice-The-Letterin~Might Slice-The-Veteran...
Rights-Of-Treasurous~Niggas Beggin With Types-Of-Ledgerin...
Write-The-Letters-In~Smashing-Metamorphic Blasts...
Rashes-Red-Endorphin-Passed~Clash-Heads-Of-Never-Warping-Masks...
Fuck-Weak-Foes~Do like 'Birds-In-Porn' And 'Duck-Each-Blow'...
Rough-Team-Flows Extended From Each Member But None-Need-Know...
Man...SLaughterin-Faggots~Fuck That Im ‘Daughtering’-Habbits...
’Sonnin’-Is-Played-Out~Puttin 'Trainin-Bra's' On This Dudes Halter-Of-Rapping...
Sodomized All-Of-His-Rabbits~Animal Instincts Are Done-Kinda-Crooked...
This Beef-Is-Done?~Let It Cool Off Then Proceed To Under-Cook-It...
This Cocky Rookie~Leavin This Parasite Partly-Parapalegic...
Hardly-Fair-Or-Believin Any Word From Ya Mouth Hard,-Dared,Or Deceivin...
Provokin Notes To Extending The Flow-To-Eat-Lives...
To Da Flowin-Greek-Guys~Tossin-Salads Till Da 'Caeser' BLows-His-Three-Eyes...

I Wrote This Diss When My Crew Was Beefin Wit YoungGadget Never Got A Chance To Post It Tho Cuz I Wasn't Tryna Flood The Open Mic Board Wit My Shit But Yeh Gadget You Can Take This However You Want....

Nice Fam , U had some tight punches , but U should have save this for a battle , Thats why i aint wasting my time dissing cats in open Mic...........

^^^I Don't Battle Much So Theres Really No Point To Save It

i dint understand some of these lines, i dint see any personals, just a fair few multis and some weird imagery. id like to see what you could do with a topic though.

I didn't understand half of the words.

Seemed like you just typed a word into a rhyming dictionary, and used every word that popped up.

Oh well, at least it all rhymed.. Nice multiz.

Pz

I thought that lyrically it was ill. But, the verse could be about anybody who's new on the board, and some of the punchlines made no sense whatsoever. I also wonder how well that would sound in real audio. I'm not sure if that would sound as good as it looks on screen... ya know... Aiight... Peace

What Didn't Ya'll Understand ?

I don't understand why you added all of those dashes and ~ everywhere.. Makes the verse look more like a fashion statement than a diss.

It's Called a Multi, I understood it!

You Had Some Good Words And Vocab, But The Punches Were Sorta Weak, As Bash Said, You Should Save This,

Anyway: 7/10 For The Verse, Flow etc..

Shiznit's THoughts:

VOCABULARY

>very well thought out...its like really damn good..brilliant!


FLOW

>smooth and not at all perfect but for some reason i read it quite nicely...and heard it was really good


WORDPLAY

>of course the multis definitely aer the factors that really made this piece extraordinary..props

CONTENT

>very nice...the punches establishment was good...keep doin that shit


OVERALL..

>its not at all hard to understand cuz u made some points really self explanatory and supported it with a couple of exessive lines of facts ...thats cool

nice one

Not alot of personals..I didnt feel offended in any way.Other wise that it had a good flow.And alot of multis.

^^I Wasn't Really Payin Attention To Tha Beef n Shit Cuz Well I Jus Wasn't So I Jus Wrote A Verse..I Guess You Can Call It A Battle Verse But Who Cares ?

Pretty decent flow PQ... But um... how did tha beef get started. I give this a 7/10 thought, but i just wanted to know how it got started.

I Have No Clue I Was Jus Like Ooook We Got Beef..Yay:)
But I'm Not Even n That Crew Nomore

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