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07-03-03, 10:25 PM | #1 | |||||||
shit is just too easy.
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BRE Presents : Main Attraction[YoungGadget Diss]
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Sights-Centered Twice-The-Letterin~Might Slice-The-Veteran...
Rights-Of-Treasurous~Niggas Beggin With Types-Of-Ledgerin... Write-The-Letters-In~Smashing-Metamorphic Blasts... Rashes-Red-Endorphin-Passed~Clash-Heads-Of-Never-Warping-Masks... Fuck-Weak-Foes~Do like 'Birds-In-Porn' And 'Duck-Each-Blow'... Rough-Team-Flows Extended From Each Member But None-Need-Know... Man...SLaughterin-Faggots~Fuck That Im ‘Daughtering’-Habbits... ’Sonnin’-Is-Played-Out~Puttin 'Trainin-Bra's' On This Dudes Halter-Of-Rapping... Sodomized All-Of-His-Rabbits~Animal Instincts Are Done-Kinda-Crooked... This Beef-Is-Done?~Let It Cool Off Then Proceed To Under-Cook-It... This Cocky Rookie~Leavin This Parasite Partly-Parapalegic... Hardly-Fair-Or-Believin Any Word From Ya Mouth Hard,-Dared,Or Deceivin... Provokin Notes To Extending The Flow-To-Eat-Lives... To Da Flowin-Greek-Guys~Tossin-Salads Till Da 'Caeser' BLows-His-Three-Eyes... I Wrote This Diss When My Crew Was Beefin Wit YoungGadget Never Got A Chance To Post It Tho Cuz I Wasn't Tryna Flood The Open Mic Board Wit My Shit But Yeh Gadget You Can Take This However You Want....
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07-03-03, 10:42 PM | #2 | |||||||
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Nice Fam , U had some tight punches , but U should have save this for a battle , Thats why i aint wasting my time dissing cats in open Mic...........
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07-03-03, 11:34 PM | #3 | |||||||
shit is just too easy.
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^^^I Don't Battle Much So Theres Really No Point To Save It
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07-03-03, 11:52 PM | #4 | ||||||
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i dint understand some of these lines, i dint see any personals, just a fair few multis and some weird imagery. id like to see what you could do with a topic though.
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07-04-03, 01:00 AM | #5 | |||||||
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I didn't understand half of the words.
Seemed like you just typed a word into a rhyming dictionary, and used every word that popped up. Oh well, at least it all rhymed.. Nice multiz. Pz |
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07-04-03, 04:11 AM | #6 | ||||||
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I thought that lyrically it was ill. But, the verse could be about anybody who's new on the board, and some of the punchlines made no sense whatsoever. I also wonder how well that would sound in real audio. I'm not sure if that would sound as good as it looks on screen... ya know... Aiight... Peace
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07-04-03, 04:50 AM | #7 | |||||||
shit is just too easy.
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What Didn't Ya'll Understand ?
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07-04-03, 12:44 PM | #8 | |||||||
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I don't understand why you added all of those dashes and ~ everywhere.. Makes the verse look more like a fashion statement than a diss.
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07-04-03, 02:13 PM | #9 | ||||||
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It's Called a Multi, I understood it!
You Had Some Good Words And Vocab, But The Punches Were Sorta Weak, As Bash Said, You Should Save This, Anyway: 7/10 For The Verse, Flow etc.. |
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07-04-03, 03:48 PM | #10 | |||||||
Tampons are expensive
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Shiznit's THoughts:
VOCABULARY >very well thought out...its like really damn good..brilliant! FLOW >smooth and not at all perfect but for some reason i read it quite nicely...and heard it was really good WORDPLAY >of course the multis definitely aer the factors that really made this piece extraordinary..props CONTENT >very nice...the punches establishment was good...keep doin that shit OVERALL.. >its not at all hard to understand cuz u made some points really self explanatory and supported it with a couple of exessive lines of facts ...thats cool nice one
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07-05-03, 03:17 AM | #11 | |||||||
wanna be sek-c
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Not alot of personals..I didnt feel offended in any way.Other wise that it had a good flow.And alot of multis.
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07-05-03, 03:52 AM | #12 | |||||||
shit is just too easy.
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^^I Wasn't Really Payin Attention To Tha Beef n Shit Cuz Well I Jus Wasn't So I Jus Wrote A Verse..I Guess You Can Call It A Battle Verse But Who Cares ?
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07-05-03, 04:58 AM | #13 | |||||||
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Pretty decent flow PQ... But um... how did tha beef get started. I give this a 7/10 thought, but i just wanted to know how it got started.
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07-05-03, 05:37 AM | #14 | |||||||
shit is just too easy.
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I Have No Clue I Was Jus Like Ooook We Got Beef..Yay
But I'm Not Even n That Crew Nomore
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08-04-03, 03:55 AM | #15 | ||||||
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