Oh Boy Flow
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Once again... (Oh Baby!) Uh huh Yea.. Yea.. Yea.. flow: Tha chick see da (Boy) She sayin (Oh Boy) Now she want dis (Boy) Got her like (Oh Boy) Elevatin tha flow and raise tha cash flow wit my (Boy Boy Boy Boy) Ima drop top (Boy) Not da cops (Oh Boy) Ima jawbreaker (Boy) Here I come (Oh Boy) Quit talkin shit before tha glock spit on ya bitches talkin bout im da next hit Y'all didnt expect me to make it this far To have flashy chains and a pimped out car// And have a bangin system that have ur girl sayin dats my (Boy Boy Boy Boy) She claimin me now she kicked ur ass out That leave u outside as we hear tha shit u shout// Ima leave u alone and let u have ur time as ur ass gets jealous over one fuckin rhyme// U's a mad(Boy) Kickin ass (Oh Boy) Im da 64 (Boy) Ima Killa (Oh Boy) Mass murderer like Jason Ur face Im erasin wit ur (Boy Boy Boy Boy) Ur a tech (Boy) He's dumpin (Oh Boy) And ur leader (Boy) Is now dead (Oh Boy) So whachu gonna do when I come and dump on u Lil bitch ass nigga that wanna pull through Now tha bullets in ur heart and this where u start wit da new game// and I stole all ur fame left ur ass like oh (Boy Boy)// Dont cry (Boy Boy Boy Boy) Im finished... Fade it... Cut it off... Sumthin... Ay? U niggaz listenin?! I said cut tha motherfucker off!!! ::music stops:: |
I Wasn;t Really Felling This Piece, You had Basic Rhyme Scheme, And Not Much Vocab. BUT, The Idea behind It Was Tight, If You'd Have Tried To Elaborate It more, Then You'd Have Gotten The Message Through...
Anyway, 6/10!, Was Aight, But Could've Been WAY Better! |
Yeah, this was OK, I think it was a little bit too much like the original song, but on that beat, making it anything other than that would be pretty difficult. I think you should try more versatile beats.
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