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Old 07-05-03, 04:45 AM   #1
Tha_64_Killa
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Oh Boy Flow

IP: 4577 CD9A

::Intro::
Once again...
(Oh Baby!)
Uh huh
Yea.. Yea.. Yea..

flow:
Tha chick see da (Boy)
She sayin (Oh Boy)
Now she want dis (Boy)
Got her like (Oh Boy)
Elevatin tha flow and
raise tha cash flow
wit my (Boy Boy Boy Boy)
Ima drop top (Boy)
Not da cops (Oh Boy)
Ima jawbreaker (Boy)
Here I come (Oh Boy)
Quit talkin shit before
tha glock spit on ya bitches
talkin bout im da next hit
Y'all didnt expect me to make it this far
To have flashy chains and a pimped out car//
And have a bangin system that have ur girl
sayin dats my (Boy Boy Boy Boy)
She claimin me now she kicked ur ass out
That leave u outside as we hear tha shit u shout//
Ima leave u alone and let u have ur time
as ur ass gets jealous over one fuckin rhyme//
U's a mad(Boy)
Kickin ass (Oh Boy)
Im da 64 (Boy)
Ima Killa (Oh Boy)
Mass murderer like Jason
Ur face Im erasin
wit ur (Boy Boy Boy Boy)
Ur a tech (Boy)
He's dumpin (Oh Boy)
And ur leader (Boy)
Is now dead (Oh Boy)
So whachu gonna do when
I come and dump on u Lil
bitch ass nigga that wanna pull through
Now tha bullets in ur heart and
this where u start wit da new game//
and I stole all ur fame left ur ass
like oh (Boy Boy)//
Dont cry (Boy Boy Boy Boy)

Im finished...

Fade it... Cut it off... Sumthin...

Ay? U niggaz listenin?!

I said cut tha motherfucker off!!!

::music stops::
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Old 07-05-03, 07:12 AM   #2
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I Wasn;t Really Felling This Piece, You had Basic Rhyme Scheme, And Not Much Vocab. BUT, The Idea behind It Was Tight, If You'd Have Tried To Elaborate It more, Then You'd Have Gotten The Message Through...

Anyway, 6/10!, Was Aight, But Could've Been WAY Better!
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Old 07-05-03, 01:53 PM   #3
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Yeah, this was OK, I think it was a little bit too much like the original song, but on that beat, making it anything other than that would be pretty difficult. I think you should try more versatile beats.
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