9 new fr eestyles put up on the page..drops links
 

I Wasent Really Feelin It Man..But Nice Flow

ummmm flow and writing is pretty on point...the delivery does not jump out at me.....ur cornieness ruins the shit....the only thing that could help u is to get less corny.....i mean that in a positive way....go roll with the niggas from the block, set up a lawn chair on yah corner and watch and take some notes....(DjX has pointed out to me i was being an ignorant ASS HOLE AND I SHOULD BE STONED....this was edited cause i was ignorant....some one please tar and feather me.....he was rite...i was acting in an immature hypocrytical fashion...)...get a new hobby....ur to corny...have a nice day and peep my shit...

^what?

yeah..if u from the "burbs" stop rappin...lmmfao....

nice..wasnt u just in a thread callin some kid racist and junk? Dont be the same type of stereotypical prick man...

Like i said b4...Tell me was the best out of all of them..easilly....u kjnow what u need to work on..annunciation....and using words that u can say easilly with the next word up....if u cant say it..dont write it...i learned that shit...cause theres some shit i cant say back to back...theres alot of words certain cats just CANT say correctlly...

all u gotta work on is the annunciation and everyting that goes with it....cause u got the voice....i hate you for that..u and your naturally 'warm' voice....dont even gotta edit your shit...homo...

nah, but u elevatin.....this is ALOT diff from your first recorded shit...

.pz.

Oh k..I'ma Listen To a Few..^^True^^ Voice Is Nice...Flow is Pretty Good...wasn't feelin the singin on "I Need A Girl"..."Tell Me" Was Nice...Nice Commercial Beats...'Thugz mansion' is nice...'oh My Goodness' is aiight...The Only Single flaw and its really nothing but if youre lookin for a bitta feedback is that like a couple and only a couple of lines in there seemed like the flow was a little forced like you needed one more word in the line or somethin but you're lookin good man...listened to some of the LP Tracks..They're Good...Should be Good when it Drops...Pz...

^lol....

that was me and dukes singing....

it was a joke man..lol

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Haha..Sorry If I Offended X...:rolleyes:

All these shits aren't to my highest potential btw...I just write one like every night to keep me writing and shit so i dont go mind blank..and yea, my energy was dead after ir ecorded my 4th one of the dya lol...and yes the singing was a joke..hence the laughing at the end.