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Old 07-15-03, 03:20 AM   #1
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9 new fr eestyles put up on the page..drops links

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Old 07-15-03, 08:41 AM   #2
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I Wasent Really Feelin It Man..But Nice Flow
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Old 07-15-03, 12:28 PM   #3
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ummmm flow and writing is pretty on point...the delivery does not jump out at me.....ur cornieness ruins the shit....the only thing that could help u is to get less corny.....i mean that in a positive way....go roll with the niggas from the block, set up a lawn chair on yah corner and watch and take some notes....(DjX has pointed out to me i was being an ignorant ASS HOLE AND I SHOULD BE STONED....this was edited cause i was ignorant....some one please tar and feather me.....he was rite...i was acting in an immature hypocrytical fashion...)...get a new hobby....ur to corny...have a nice day and peep my shit...

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Old 07-15-03, 06:48 PM   #4
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^what?

yeah..if u from the "burbs" stop rappin...lmmfao....

nice..wasnt u just in a thread callin some kid racist and junk? Dont be the same type of stereotypical prick man...

Like i said b4...Tell me was the best out of all of them..easilly....u kjnow what u need to work on..annunciation....and using words that u can say easilly with the next word up....if u cant say it..dont write it...i learned that shit...cause theres some shit i cant say back to back...theres alot of words certain cats just CANT say correctlly...

all u gotta work on is the annunciation and everyting that goes with it....cause u got the voice....i hate you for that..u and your naturally 'warm' voice....dont even gotta edit your shit...homo...

nah, but u elevatin.....this is ALOT diff from your first recorded shit...

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Old 07-16-03, 05:52 AM   #5
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Oh k..I'ma Listen To a Few..^^True^^ Voice Is Nice...Flow is Pretty Good...wasn't feelin the singin on "I Need A Girl"..."Tell Me" Was Nice...Nice Commercial Beats...'Thugz mansion' is nice...'oh My Goodness' is aiight...The Only Single flaw and its really nothing but if youre lookin for a bitta feedback is that like a couple and only a couple of lines in there seemed like the flow was a little forced like you needed one more word in the line or somethin but you're lookin good man...listened to some of the LP Tracks..They're Good...Should be Good when it Drops...Pz...
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Old 07-18-03, 01:57 AM   #6
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^lol....

that was me and dukes singing....

it was a joke man..lol

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Old 07-18-03, 02:16 AM   #7
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Haha..Sorry If I Offended X...
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Old 07-18-03, 01:56 PM   #8
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All these shits aren't to my highest potential btw...I just write one like every night to keep me writing and shit so i dont go mind blank..and yea, my energy was dead after ir ecorded my 4th one of the dya lol...and yes the singing was a joke..hence the laughing at the end.
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