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Accelerate 07-29-03 04:08 PM

UnFoCuSeD
 
I can't seem to see straight without thinkin love
always picture one woman's face, a gift from above
I can't focus without thinking bout you
If we could get together and shit, who knew?
How the Passions inside formin, about to explode
Talks on the on the phone, my words reveal the love shown
The way of the world is envy those Higher
Cuz espresso, and computers, can't compare to our love wired
The way of the world is to laugh at those who make mistakes
No arguements in public, just goin out, will raise the stakes
I care for you, yea in my life Iv'e been selfish
But my time with you is like hot-dogs, the times that i relish
The love formin passion, to deep to explain
How so much of our pleasure can lead to such pain
we've been mad at each other, yea tha shit happens alot
but we kept our roots in, so in time we won't rot
the love that I feel, changed me to a different man
Try to speak proper, instead of speak slang
I always live, to never hit another female
I always have rules that never go stale
You may leave me tomorrow, to go to whom that you like
Tellin me hateful words, after our recent fight
But i dedicate this piece unto you
because through the anger in your soul, your beautiful
Physical appearance can not take a toll
Because i will still love you at 80 years old
You seem to be ad at me, why would i lie
maybe i'll see, maybe this is goodbye
I didn't take advantage of the gift, given from Above
I still will remember you, though you lost your love
But then unto you, please don't let me forget
I admitted i cheated, something i regret
But i see my love enter dangerous times by now
how after such time together,your parting, How?
The love that i feel, can no longer be explained
Your leaving, and I regret that i left you in such Pain

Accelerate 07-29-03 05:14 PM

UPPIN!!!!!!!

{UneeK} 07-29-03 06:15 PM

concept has been played so many times its difficult to improve, vocab wasnt that great and no wordplay, cudda been better

Pistol Pete 07-29-03 06:28 PM

nice drop


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