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07-29-03, 04:08 PM | #1 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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UnFoCuSeD
IP: 8BEC CACE
I can't seem to see straight without thinkin love
always picture one woman's face, a gift from above I can't focus without thinking bout you If we could get together and shit, who knew? How the Passions inside formin, about to explode Talks on the on the phone, my words reveal the love shown The way of the world is envy those Higher Cuz espresso, and computers, can't compare to our love wired The way of the world is to laugh at those who make mistakes No arguements in public, just goin out, will raise the stakes I care for you, yea in my life Iv'e been selfish But my time with you is like hot-dogs, the times that i relish The love formin passion, to deep to explain How so much of our pleasure can lead to such pain we've been mad at each other, yea tha shit happens alot but we kept our roots in, so in time we won't rot the love that I feel, changed me to a different man Try to speak proper, instead of speak slang I always live, to never hit another female I always have rules that never go stale You may leave me tomorrow, to go to whom that you like Tellin me hateful words, after our recent fight But i dedicate this piece unto you because through the anger in your soul, your beautiful Physical appearance can not take a toll Because i will still love you at 80 years old You seem to be ad at me, why would i lie maybe i'll see, maybe this is goodbye I didn't take advantage of the gift, given from Above I still will remember you, though you lost your love But then unto you, please don't let me forget I admitted i cheated, something i regret But i see my love enter dangerous times by now how after such time together,your parting, How? The love that i feel, can no longer be explained Your leaving, and I regret that i left you in such Pain
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07-29-03, 05:14 PM | #2 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
UPPIN!!!!!!!
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07-29-03, 06:15 PM | #3 | |||||||
Banned
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IP: CC07 EC19
concept has been played so many times its difficult to improve, vocab wasnt that great and no wordplay, cudda been better
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07-29-03, 06:28 PM | #4 | ||||||
BANNED For Dumbassness
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IP: 9BD2 F24F
nice drop
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